Pt 1. Ch. 3 - Page 14

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MistakeNPotatoes
24th Jun 2015, 10:27 AM

Okay, that.. that can't feel good..

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MadJak91
24th Jun 2015, 10:32 AM

Ouch! Broken wings seem so painful for some reason :(

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MistakeNPotatoes
24th Jun 2015, 5:30 PM

Oh yeah, there's.. no way it isn't some kind of crazy painful.

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Blockround
24th Jun 2015, 10:32 AM

ow. should listen to Jaunt, he has the good advice there, for certain.

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MistakeNPotatoes
24th Jun 2015, 5:31 PM

Yeah, best not ask for more at this point...

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Miaubol
24th Jun 2015, 10:38 AM

Ooooooow that hurts! D:

And congrats, you made me empathize ..strongly empathize with the villain ;)

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MistakeNPotatoes
24th Jun 2015, 5:31 PM

Oh!? But who is the villain!? Hmmm!?

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Miaubol
25th Jun 2015, 1:55 PM

;)

I love 'blue and orange morality'.

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MistakeNPotatoes
25th Jun 2015, 10:14 PM

There is little that I adore more in narrative!

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zaika
24th Jun 2015, 10:46 AM

OH GOD. *shiver* Broken bones give me the willies.

I do like the villans a lot. It's gonna be hard choosing sides here. They're both a bunch of jerks!

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MistakeNPotatoes
24th Jun 2015, 6:25 PM

Sorry! Really, considering how things can go in Lovecraftian novella, he's doing pretty well so far...

But yeah, there's reasons to like/dislike both sides, I'd hope, always glad to hear it :)

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Centcomm
24th Jun 2015, 11:16 AM

Wow.. nicely done Mistake .. the pain is palatable .. Poor jack and careful Jaunt.. you almost sound like you care :D

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MistakeNPotatoes
24th Jun 2015, 6:27 PM

Thank you! It definitely isn't meant to be the easiest page to get through, so, hearing that it has some kind of impact is good.

And yeah, almost seems strange hearing Jaunt be concerned, doesn't fit him as well as his suit, does it?

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ProfEtheric
24th Jun 2015, 11:37 AM

Yeeeowch!

Part of me is really glad that it looks like Jack might make it through this. I swear I'm not a traitor to my species!

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MistakeNPotatoes
24th Jun 2015, 6:27 PM

Looks like he's got a shot! I don't think anyone would consider you a traitor for that, hah.

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Taily
24th Jun 2015, 12:20 PM

Nah, he'll be fine.

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MistakeNPotatoes
24th Jun 2015, 6:28 PM

Yeh s'all good. Chill out, everyone!

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crowwinters
24th Jun 2015, 12:37 PM

Oh, fuck. The wing snap close up sent weird shivers, though I would have to imagine it's the least of Jack's concerns at the moment.

I already need like the next 10 pages plz.

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lirvilas
24th Jun 2015, 4:58 PM

Yeesh... ouch. I second Crowwinters!

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MistakeNPotatoes
24th Jun 2015, 6:29 PM

The next ten are mostly finished! But you can't see them yet, muahahah!

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Twilight
24th Jun 2015, 6:56 PM

Quoting Super Dave Osborne: "New Pain!"

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MistakeNPotatoes
24th Jun 2015, 7:15 PM

Oh wow, what a reference! Haha, I remember liking that show, too!

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rufiangel
25th Jun 2015, 12:55 AM

Oh no, Jack! D:

Aww but don't want them humans to die, either...

DANGIT MR. TATERS! Why you play with our emotions like dis D:

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MistakeNPotatoes
25th Jun 2015, 9:04 PM

As long as you don't want to stop reading, eheheh!

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Holodrum
25th Jun 2015, 9:28 AM

Awww!! Jaunt cares! There's a soft and cuddly side hidden in the sophisticated, murderous, unspeakable horror.

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MistakeNPotatoes
25th Jun 2015, 9:05 PM

Jaunt, Tsundere Posterchild.

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iddqd
25th Jun 2015, 1:00 PM

Ouch! An open fracture D:

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MistakeNPotatoes
25th Jun 2015, 10:15 PM

Yeah, pretty harsh :I

I just caught up with Eternal Autumn again, you're killin' it!

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Seabiscuit
25th Jun 2015, 6:16 PM

NO! JACK!!
Ok I know which side I'm rooting for now ;-;

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MistakeNPotatoes
25th Jun 2015, 10:15 PM

And the pendulum sways...

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keltyzoid!
25th Jun 2015, 8:04 PM

GROSS SOBBING ;___;

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MistakeNPotatoes
25th Jun 2015, 10:15 PM

With SNOT and BOOGERS?

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ChilPhil
26th Jun 2015, 9:10 AM

Ouch. I hope Jack has some good medical insurance.

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MistakeNPotatoes
26th Jun 2015, 10:24 AM

Gee, I hope so, too - I wonder what kind of plans the old ones provide?

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Memoria Caelestie
23rd Jan 2016, 1:13 PM

Now I feeling bad for jack!

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