Pt 1. Ch. 3 - Page 13
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view Taily's profile

19th Jun 2015, 10:56 AM


Chase's face tho omg I love it.

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19th Jun 2015, 4:41 PM

Now that you mention it, how DID Jack put that shirt on? The vest I can sort of see, but how in the name of all that is squamous and gibbering did he manage to fit those wings through those sleeves?

On a different note, and repeating my comment from earlier, JACK DON'T DIE JACK DON'T DIE

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view MadJak91's profile

19th Jun 2015, 11:43 AM

You got that monster, pal! Whoo hoo!
Oh? Am I doing it wrong?

Seriously now. The one time Jack wants to make a name for himself, this happens :(

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view MistakeNPotatoes's profile

19th Jun 2015, 3:18 PM

Oh, bitter irony...

Really though, people can root for who they want! I'm kinda making the story with the idea that there is no right or wrong. I'm giving the monsters a fair shot at sympathy, though!

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view ProfEtheric's profile

19th Jun 2015, 1:01 PM

I kinda saw this coming. Jack acted a little too rashly. Bravo on having the guts to pull this. (I know it's not likely to be a popular move.)

Of course, this gives a possible opening to the Deep Ones...

EDIT: I'm going to go ahead and firmly put my support behind Team Humans (despite the seemingly overwhelming support for Team Eldritch Horrors - people really HAVE forgotten that these things ultimately want to end our world...)

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view MistakeNPotatoes's profile

19th Jun 2015, 3:23 PM

Thank you, I figured it be a pretty polarizing moment in the story - and given where your support lies, it looks like I was right!

Don't worry, I have no plans to make it impossible to favor either side!

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view Centcomm's profile

19th Jun 2015, 5:39 PM

OUCH well thats going to leave a mark.. or three.. >_< never charge a human with a tompson if you arent bullet proof ..

( edit ) and even though I like both sides .. I kinda like the humans more .. well I like HER! the girl.. :D

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view MistakeNPotatoes's profile

20th Jun 2015, 5:40 PM

Even if you are, those are some big bullets coming in large numbers!

I totally understand, though, Clara is a favorite of mine, too! I like em all in their own ways, though.

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19th Jun 2015, 5:41 PM

These sounds may or may not be severe, as this is Alien physiology after all! But regardless, it looks like they hurt!

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21st Jun 2015, 10:34 AM

Um, sure. I'm just cautioning against automatically assuming that the wounds he suffered are fatal, or are as severe as they would be if it was a human body taking the same amount of damage. After all, Cthulhu, got a ship rammed through him and it was only a flesh wound, right?

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view MistakeNPotatoes's profile

21st Jun 2015, 10:53 AM

Haha, yeah, that's a good point, though the Alert was not exactly large compared to his mass. I remember I saw someone talking about that on a forum and someone had a handy chart to compare the size of an average yacht to Cthulhu, not that we have any exact measurements there. I'd say you're on the right track, though..

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view crowwinters's profile

20th Jun 2015, 8:20 AM

Welp. I didn't see that coming, but that is the nature of guns.

(Chase's shooting face is fucking hilarious. and scary.)

Jack gets shot so quickly after having been built up that I'm not convinced yet that this is enough to do him in. That's-that's what I'm telling myself at least...

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view MistakeNPotatoes's profile

20th Jun 2015, 5:41 PM

I was trying to capture the "OH FUCK" look mixed with concentration and determination, and that was the result, heheh.

Yeah, it would be pretty cruel for him to get killed when he's trying to prove himself..

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23rd Jun 2015, 6:13 PM

for a guy who can theoretically exceed the speed of light jack sure is slow

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view Casscade's profile

24th Jun 2015, 12:02 AM

Oh nooooo! ;.;
Great work with the expressions and dynamic poses here btw!

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24th Jun 2015, 1:52 PM

This is why you don't scream out when making a sneak attack.

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