Pt 1. Ch. 3 - Page 13

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MistakeNPotatoes
19th Jun 2015, 10:17 AM

Ohhh dear...

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xianyu118
19th Jun 2015, 10:26 AM

THIS WAS NOT A GOOD MOVE MY MAN

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MistakeNPotatoes
19th Jun 2015, 3:11 PM

Indeed not... perhaps more subtlety next time if he gets the chance.

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Spelledeg
19th Jun 2015, 10:30 AM

JACK NO.

HUMANS STOP WINNING. (gr8 action on this page, man)

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MistakeNPotatoes
19th Jun 2015, 3:12 PM

He's being a bit of a jerk, huh?

Really though, thanks :)

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Miaubol
19th Jun 2015, 10:49 AM

Oh dear indeed!

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MistakeNPotatoes
19th Jun 2015, 3:12 PM

D:

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Taily
19th Jun 2015, 10:56 AM

OH CRAP JACK

Chase's face tho omg I love it.
"NOPE. BRAKKA BRAKKA BRAKKA FRICKER"

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MistakeNPotatoes
19th Jun 2015, 3:14 PM

Yeah, Chase don't give a damn. Hang in there little guy!

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keltyzoid!
19th Jun 2015, 11:03 AM

NO.

JUST, NO. ;___;

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MistakeNPotatoes
19th Jun 2015, 3:14 PM

:(

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ChilPhil
19th Jun 2015, 11:06 AM

Oh man, and that was such a nice vest.

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MistakeNPotatoes
19th Jun 2015, 3:15 PM

Yeah, I bet it was a pain to put on, too!

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Droicosuchus
19th Jun 2015, 4:41 PM

Now that you mention it, how DID Jack put that shirt on? The vest I can sort of see, but how in the name of all that is squamous and gibbering did he manage to fit those wings through those sleeves?

On a different note, and repeating my comment from earlier, JACK DON'T DIE JACK DON'T DIE

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Taily
19th Jun 2015, 5:40 PM

sssshh don't question it

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MistakeNPotatoes
20th Jun 2015, 5:39 PM

What she said

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MadJak91
19th Jun 2015, 11:43 AM

You got that monster, pal! Whoo hoo!
Oh? Am I doing it wrong?

Seriously now. The one time Jack wants to make a name for himself, this happens :(

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MistakeNPotatoes
19th Jun 2015, 3:18 PM

Oh, bitter irony...

Really though, people can root for who they want! I'm kinda making the story with the idea that there is no right or wrong. I'm giving the monsters a fair shot at sympathy, though!

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ProfEtheric
19th Jun 2015, 1:01 PM

I kinda saw this coming. Jack acted a little too rashly. Bravo on having the guts to pull this. (I know it's not likely to be a popular move.)

Of course, this gives a possible opening to the Deep Ones...

EDIT: I'm going to go ahead and firmly put my support behind Team Humans (despite the seemingly overwhelming support for Team Eldritch Horrors - people really HAVE forgotten that these things ultimately want to end our world...)

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MistakeNPotatoes
19th Jun 2015, 3:23 PM

Thank you, I figured it be a pretty polarizing moment in the story - and given where your support lies, it looks like I was right!

Don't worry, I have no plans to make it impossible to favor either side!

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Centcomm
19th Jun 2015, 5:39 PM

OUCH well thats going to leave a mark.. or three.. >_< never charge a human with a tompson if you arent bullet proof ..

( edit ) and even though I like both sides .. I kinda like the humans more .. well I like HER! the girl.. :D

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MistakeNPotatoes
20th Jun 2015, 5:40 PM

Even if you are, those are some big bullets coming in large numbers!

I totally understand, though, Clara is a favorite of mine, too! I like em all in their own ways, though.

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Twilight
19th Jun 2015, 5:41 PM

These sounds may or may not be severe, as this is Alien physiology after all! But regardless, it looks like they hurt!

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MistakeNPotatoes
20th Jun 2015, 5:40 PM

Yeah, he'll walk it off, right!?

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Twilight
21st Jun 2015, 10:34 AM

Um, sure. I'm just cautioning against automatically assuming that the wounds he suffered are fatal, or are as severe as they would be if it was a human body taking the same amount of damage. After all, Cthulhu, got a ship rammed through him and it was only a flesh wound, right?

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MistakeNPotatoes
21st Jun 2015, 10:53 AM

Haha, yeah, that's a good point, though the Alert was not exactly large compared to his mass. I remember I saw someone talking about that on a forum and someone had a handy chart to compare the size of an average yacht to Cthulhu, not that we have any exact measurements there. I'd say you're on the right track, though..

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crowwinters
20th Jun 2015, 8:20 AM

Welp. I didn't see that coming, but that is the nature of guns.

(Chase's shooting face is fucking hilarious. and scary.)

Jack gets shot so quickly after having been built up that I'm not convinced yet that this is enough to do him in. That's-that's what I'm telling myself at least...

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MistakeNPotatoes
20th Jun 2015, 5:41 PM

I was trying to capture the "OH FUCK" look mixed with concentration and determination, and that was the result, heheh.

Yeah, it would be pretty cruel for him to get killed when he's trying to prove himself..

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broran
23rd Jun 2015, 6:13 PM

for a guy who can theoretically exceed the speed of light jack sure is slow

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MistakeNPotatoes
24th Jun 2015, 10:03 AM

Hahah! He moves quite differently in space, I assure you.

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Casscade
24th Jun 2015, 12:02 AM

Oh nooooo! ;.;
Great work with the expressions and dynamic poses here btw!

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MistakeNPotatoes
24th Jun 2015, 10:06 AM

Thank you, I can only hope to achieve levels of expression that you create!

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Blockround
24th Jun 2015, 12:04 AM

the expressions are very expressive, 10/10 good work

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MistakeNPotatoes
24th Jun 2015, 10:07 AM

It sounds like they are doing their job - thank

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MooMoo
24th Jun 2015, 1:52 PM

This is why you don't scream out when making a sneak attack.

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Taily
28th Jul 2015, 8:37 PM

Watch me swooce right in.

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MistakeNPotatoes
29th Jul 2015, 10:37 AM

SWOOCE

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