Pt 1. Ch. 3 - Page 12
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Taily
17th Jun 2015, 10:32 AM

Come on, Chase, you know Marco would prefer a nice Camembert.

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ProfEtheric
17th Jun 2015, 10:54 AM

This is not going to end well for someone. My guess is either Jack or Chase...

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MadJak91
17th Jun 2015, 11:12 AM

Oh yeah!
I have been waiting for Jack to swoop downs since he was undetected and in the right position :D

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keltyzoid!
17th Jun 2015, 11:23 AM

Jack openly displays his apparent misunderstanding of the concept of "element of surprise."

Also I keep wanting to call him "Brooklyn." Damn you, Disney's Gargoyles.

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MistakeNPotatoes
17th Jun 2015, 3:26 PM

Yeah, he's like a novice ninja. They sneak up behind you but then they yell a loud kiai before they attack, just to give you a chance, you know?

And yeah, I know his design has a lot of similarities.. I might have changed that if I thought about it early on enough, but I struggle enough not thinking of him as a frackin' Kobold. He's definitely closer to a lot of existing elements than some of my other characters, ugh..

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zaika
17th Jun 2015, 11:48 AM

Ooooh, Jack is gonna save the day for *somebody.*

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crowwinters
17th Jun 2015, 3:49 PM

That lighting on Clara's face is A+, and the collective tension filled grit teeth in this page could crush steel.

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ChilPhil
17th Jun 2015, 5:01 PM

Those two probably thought they finally had things manageable until they found out they had another thing to contend with.
Man, they aren't catching a break.

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MistakeNPotatoes
19th Jun 2015, 7:59 AM

They walked into the lion's den, it'd be foolish for them to think they'd come out unscathed!

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Skweeee
18th Jun 2015, 11:13 PM

I'm with Seabiscuit... I don't know who I want to come out on top.

You planned it that way, didn't you?

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