Pt 1. Ch. 3 - Page 11
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MistakeNPotatoes
12th Jun 2015, 10:24 AM

This page didn't turn out as well as I wanted it to. Oh well, I'll have to try better next time!

I hope you all like it, regardless.

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Holodrum
12th Jun 2015, 10:29 AM

Last three backgrounds are fun for me. They look textured.

Gotta say man, these guys are hell-a prepared. I love it. Only big question for me is what double-sided meta-physical favor did they have to pay to get a hold of that amulet?

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MistakeNPotatoes
12th Jun 2015, 10:32 AM

THAT'S THE QUESTION, ISN'T IT? :D

And thank you, I wanted a fun background to represent their surprise. Speaking of backgrounds, they are conspicuously absent here.... heh heh...

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Holodrum
16th Jun 2015, 2:00 PM

Caurse it doesn't help that Jack is giving that gun such a covetous look. "We must have it my precious."

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MadJak91
12th Jun 2015, 10:32 AM

Damn... If Jaunt looks that surprised then that is no ordinary machine gun.
Not that it CAN when after all this time the weapon is what was important about the briefcase :D

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MistakeNPotatoes
12th Jun 2015, 10:36 AM

Well, you'd be surprised. Normal weapons aren't dangerous to him, no, but you can bet that deep ones bleed!

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ProfEtheric
12th Jun 2015, 11:29 AM

"But THIS will work on creatures from our dimension!"

Sorry. I always try to figure out something cool for characters to say. That one... err...

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MistakeNPotatoes
12th Jun 2015, 3:43 PM

Hah!

Not a lot of one liners here. They're all going to belong to Jaunt pretty much, because he is THAT full of himself.

Maybe not after this, we'll see! .)

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ChilPhil
12th Jun 2015, 12:46 PM

Uh oh, you dudes better watch out, he has a gun there.
Man, all I carry in my briefcase are paperwork and snacks. I could try to persuade the guys with snacks...:)

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MistakeNPotatoes
12th Jun 2015, 3:43 PM

I mean... depending on which one of them it was, and the circumstances... that might WORK.

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Twilight
12th Jun 2015, 7:55 PM

At least it isn't a guitar case rocket launcher, like that Desperado movie.

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Dromicosuchus
12th Jun 2015, 5:00 PM

I love how dramatic Chase is in pulling out the gun. He could have simply flipped the catch open and lifted it out, but that would have been far too dull. Much better to LUNGE back and WOOSH forward with big, wide, full-body pivots and flourishes! Jaunt's not upset in that last panel because he's been foiled; he's just irritated that Chase is trying to copy his flair.

...I love the comic, by the by. I'm really looking forward to seeing where you go with this!

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MistakeNPotatoes
13th Jun 2015, 8:02 AM

I really hadn't thought about this but I love it - you're right, he's absolutely much more showy than he's really needs to be, haha! "Damn, he has SLICK MOVES!" says Jaunt, his fists clenched and quivering with his burning rage...

But thank you, though, I'm really glad that you like it!

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Holodrum
16th Jun 2015, 9:56 AM

And thus, the Dance-off continues with Chase nearly bringing down the house.

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iddqd
13th Jun 2015, 10:59 AM

Nope, but Dark Corners of the Earth sported one somewhere on the USS Urania... under much similar circumstances may I add!

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irongate
13th Jun 2015, 1:31 AM

We wanted to stop in to tell you guys how awesome this scene has been. The build up to it was intense and the pay off has been even better. Loved the surprise Chase and Clara had for Jaunt, was really quite awesome.

Fantastic storytelling all around and with each new page you show us why Shadows is one of the top books here on ComicFury (and everywhere else too, seriously, why aren't you guys as big as the bloody Oatmeal? That needs fixing).

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MistakeNPotatoes
13th Jun 2015, 8:08 AM

Oh my goodness, this is a lot of positivity - thank you so much .D I'm just glad people are happy with it and not frustrated that it took so long to get to.

I dunno about this 'top' business, though I appreciate the notion, heheh. You guys are too sweet though, I appreciate it .)

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Taily
15th Jun 2015, 12:20 PM

((and I don't even like "Marco", I really identify as "Nelly" and I wish people respected that))

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Skweeee
14th Jun 2015, 8:25 PM

I love the rendering of the characters faces in the last three panels. Nicely done.

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MistakeNPotatoes
15th Jun 2015, 11:48 AM

Thank you so much :D Not a lot else going on on the page but I did like how they turned out, yeah.

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zaika
17th Jun 2015, 11:47 AM

I don't know why, buy Chase makes me laugh out loud in this update. LOLOLOL

Also...the last three panels...HOLY CRAP DUDE. You're killing me with the awesome.

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