Pt 1. Ch. 3 - Page 2

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MistakeNPotatoes
13th May 2015, 10:29 AM

My buffer shrinks... on top of moving, I also got pretty sick this last week, so art has taken a back seat unfortunately...

I'm trying to get it back, interrupting this comic, especially at this point, is not something I want to do :/

(I still have a couple week's buffer don't worry too much, haha.)

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MadJak91
13th May 2015, 10:52 AM

Yep, this is certainly going the way I imagined it.
Now let's see about that necklace...

Also, I cannot help myself to notice some similarities between this duo and the duo from the Broken Sword adventure games :D
In design at least :D

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MistakeNPotatoes
13th May 2015, 4:05 PM

You're the second person that's said that! I haven't ever played Broken Sword, but I hear a lot of people rave about how much they love the series, so I won't take it as a bad thing!

I hopefully will have a surprise or two for you, and it's not all going the way you expect, heh.

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MadJak91
13th May 2015, 4:11 PM

Definitely!
I just like to keep guessing or predicting :D

Yep, those are good games but I am surprised someone has brought it up before!

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Taily
13th May 2015, 11:07 AM

Chase, it's the creep from the hill.
CHASE, IT'S THE CREEP FROM THE HILL.

so many great lines on this page, oh my god Jaunt just being like "I'M LITERALLY RIGHT FRICKIN HERE MAN LMAO"

good luck with that gun, chase

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MistakeNPotatoes
13th May 2015, 4:06 PM

Jaunt gets called a lot of things not to his face, apparently, heheh...

Good luck indeed, let's see if it can even shoot through the thick layers of sass Jaunt's projecting.

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Holodrum
14th May 2015, 10:06 AM

One might imagine he Likes getting shot in the face. Maybe it tickles. Or brushes through his inter-phasic body at just the right frequency to left him feel things he's never known he could want before...

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Taily
14th May 2015, 11:16 AM

oh god oh no jaunt please

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MistakeNPotatoes
14th May 2015, 10:01 PM

BAD TOUCH BAD TOUCH

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Donkaccino
13th May 2015, 3:14 PM

Jaunt is like the perfect mix of badass and classy. XD Haha!
Great work! Loving the dialogue~

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MistakeNPotatoes
13th May 2015, 4:08 PM

Just what I'm going for :)

Thank you!

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Ninja
13th May 2015, 5:07 PM

Oh dear, the interlopers seem confident... Could Jaunt actually be in trouble?

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MistakeNPotatoes
13th May 2015, 10:03 PM

Could be! We're pages away...

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iddqd
13th May 2015, 9:39 PM

The tension is killing me! Ohhhh is Clara putting on what I think she is putting on???
Also, you're really killing it with the perspective, in a good way, especially with the gun panel on the bottom.

Get better soon, man.

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MistakeNPotatoes
13th May 2015, 10:05 PM

Good! I like a good bit of tension, heh. I ain't giving NOTHIN' away, though, you can count on that ;)

Thank you, though, for the compliments and well wishing. I want to get back into drawing and get better, and better and better. I want that drive back, y'know?

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Holodrum
14th May 2015, 9:57 AM

Eech... That does not look like a comfortable piece of jewelry Clara, probably won't be good to be running around with those thorns at your neck.

*switches to a high-society rich lady accent* Also darling, it certainly is a... bold choice to go with your ensemble. You might want to consider a ruby brooch, or a sapphire medallion. It would really compliment your mans' eyes you see.

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MistakeNPotatoes
14th May 2015, 9:58 PM

It's definitely not an article of fashion, perhaps it's functional? :D

Oh man, I'm starting to wonder exactly how resistant Clara would be to fashion advice. It's not really an element of her character that I've explored...

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Holodrum
15th May 2015, 9:44 AM

If she ever wore white, it would definitely be after Labor Day.

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ProfEtheric
14th May 2015, 10:56 AM

Oh, man... Tension mounting...

I hope you feel better soon, man, 'cause we need you to keep producing Shadows... :)

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MistakeNPotatoes
14th May 2015, 9:59 PM

I still have like 3 weeks worth of stuff to upload, I'd just like to keep it that way!

I'm feeling good today, so sickness isn't a problem, now my issue is the mountain of work I have to do to finish moving in here. I'm goin' as fast as I can manage!

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Miaubol
14th May 2015, 11:09 AM

"We're at the part where you try to shoot me."

Seems he has done this many times before ;)

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MistakeNPotatoes
14th May 2015, 10:00 PM

He's like a cat playing with a mouse, isn't he?

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keltyzoid!
14th May 2015, 12:00 PM

Jaunt is literally so rad. I love him.

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MistakeNPotatoes
14th May 2015, 10:00 PM

I'm glad you like him! He's really fun to write!

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crowwinters
14th May 2015, 2:14 PM

Jaunt's smugass expression in the center panel is so good. So good.

I feel like this is the height of tension thus far in the comic. I literately have no idea what's about to happen, and I'm fucking thrilled.

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MistakeNPotatoes
14th May 2015, 10:00 PM

Just... pages away... pages...

But thank you, I'm excited to keep it going :D

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zaika
20th May 2015, 11:07 AM

That last panel. So freaking perfect.

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