pt. 1 ch. 2 - Page 32
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MistakeNPotatoes
1st May 2015, 10:30 AM

Finally, the end of chapter two! I'm super excited about reaching this point, and about where it's going next!

When this is going up I'm gonna be on the road so I'm not gonna see any comments until I arrive at my new home back in Nebraska. I've had a really busy week, wasn't able to work on the comic at all but I've got enough of a buffer that there shouldn't be an interruption of any kind!

Be well, all :D

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MadJak91
1st May 2015, 11:33 AM

I do not make such comments often as I am in no position here, but my eyes noticed it.
The space depth in the first panel is kind of odd. The road blends too much with the wall.
Again, it has nothing to do with anything and I am not being an ass. Just noticed is all :D

(And Tom stole the second part of my comment :< )

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MistakeNPotatoes
2nd May 2015, 10:05 PM

Hey man, do nooooot hesitate to make comments like this, you're not out of line at all and I totally appreciate it!

I agree, that first panel I had a little bit of trouble with, it was definitely a 'better finished than perfect' moment if that makes sense, haha - I'm going to be trying to figure out how to use similar angles without weirdness in the future, for sure, especially since people noticed!

And Tom's a JERK for taking your comment!

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ProfEtheric
1st May 2015, 2:40 PM

Aw, crap... The one they are least likely to be able to deal with, one way or another...

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Taily
1st May 2015, 3:30 PM

ooooOOOOH HOOO HOOO HOOOOOO. The Vespa-revving noises HUMMING PULSATIONS OF DOOM.

They're so screwed, wow.

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Holodrum
1st May 2015, 5:32 PM

Eh, I usually just imagine the TARDIS noises for things like this. Jaunt is almost too awesome though, he does need his own sound.

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MistakeNPotatoes
2nd May 2015, 10:09 PM

SO SCREWED YOU HAVE NO IDEA.

Now I'm just gonna hear a scooter/moped sound when Nyarlathotep and Jaunt warp into places, THANKS.

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jolle
2nd May 2015, 5:30 AM

A mysterious portal? Jump in without hesitation!

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Ninja
2nd May 2015, 3:53 PM

That's no portal. That's Jaunt coming in to destroy some interlopers, i'm afraid. I was just getting attached to these one too...

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Holodrum
4th May 2015, 9:17 AM

Is it a John Conner not-terminator from the future sent back to kill his mother, who's being defended by a re-programmed Arnold-Terminator, all while trying to escape a new T-2000 liquid Terminator?!... Yeah this new movie coming out is a little nuts.

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Holodrum
5th May 2015, 8:44 AM

Jaunt on the other hand... I imagine him more smooth/reptilian than anything else. His cloths seem to give him presence and sophistication, more than modesty.

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Spelledeg
7th May 2015, 11:05 AM

Oh man. These two can't catch a break...
The sequence is really clear here, I love your storytelling for that since clarity is paramount. Unfortunately, I don't think Jaunt will let them live to see next morning. :( (Or they'll get 'the look' and be forced into the whole shebang too) HMM...

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MistakeNPotatoes
7th May 2015, 3:35 PM

T'would be a heck of a twist if one of them was deep one-born! :D

Thank you though, I'm always concerned about whether my sequential storytelling is clear or not, I'm glad you can follow :)

New page up tomorrow, though! Maybe he'll be super nice to them? :'D

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