Pt. 1 Ch. 2 - Page 15
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view MistakeNPotatoes's profile

18th Feb 2015, 11:10 AM

Much like the hotel scene, bear with me, the pace is slowin' down a little bit :I

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view Centcomm's profile

18th Feb 2015, 11:27 AM

yeah .. listen to the girl you git! :D

:D :D :D we are generally right :D

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view ProfEtheric's profile

18th Feb 2015, 11:47 AM

Some of us love the slower pacing. Especially with your subject matter, you have to explain sometimes.

And yeah, listen to Clara. She's "just a girl", but she's got a good head on her shoulders and came into this knowing a lot more than you, Mr. Detective!!!!!

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view MistakeNPotatoes's profile

18th Feb 2015, 12:19 PM

I know you're right, but I also know I'm 60 pages into this thing and I haven't had an action sequence since page 10, hahah! I'm really anxious, but I also know people can take a break and come back to it later if the slow pacing isn't quick enough to keep interest.

And yeah, Chase would benefit from trusting Clara a little more, he's starting to come around, though.

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view Alicia's profile

18th Feb 2015, 1:40 PM

Even when the pacing slows down a bit, you never lose my interest. I am excited to read what he has to say. :D (I like talking scenes like this.)

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view Taily's profile

18th Feb 2015, 9:30 PM

Man, remember the halcyon days of red-hot room-booking action? That was the life.

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view Pivociarz's profile

19th Feb 2015, 11:54 AM

Nah, I think having dialog is still good, but it could be better if it was really good writen, I don't say it's bad, but it could have more emotions or elements of humor in it, in pages like this people could put interaction between characters. Here is still really good.

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view MistakeNPotatoes's profile

20th Feb 2015, 1:30 PM

Thanks - I'm new to comics in general, I'm trying to build on writing, storytelling and art all at once, so I have a lot to learn about each. I'm glad to hear I'm making progress, though!

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view zaika's profile

19th Feb 2015, 4:43 PM I have to wait. This is just getting better 'n better. :D

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20th Feb 2015, 12:25 PM

'Innsmouth' is one of my favorite of Lovecraft's novellas and IMO you're doing a fine job in continuing the Dagon/Cthulhu mythos in your comic. Your depiction of the human/Deep Ones hybrids is spot on as is the overall decay and degeneracy of the town itself. Keep up the good work.

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