Pt. 1 Ch. 2 - Page 15

Author--

view MistakeNPotatoes's profile

MistakeNPotatoes
18th Feb 2015, 11:10 AM

Much like the hotel scene, bear with me, the pace is slowin' down a little bit :I

(Edit) (Delete)

Users--

view Centcomm's profile

Centcomm
18th Feb 2015, 11:27 AM

yeah .. listen to the girl you git! :D

:D :D :D we are generally right :D

(Edit) (Delete) (Reply)

view MistakeNPotatoes's profile

MistakeNPotatoes
18th Feb 2015, 12:17 PM

Darn skippy!

(Edit) (Delete) (Reply)

view ProfEtheric's profile

ProfEtheric
18th Feb 2015, 11:47 AM

Some of us love the slower pacing. Especially with your subject matter, you have to explain sometimes.

And yeah, listen to Clara. She's "just a girl", but she's got a good head on her shoulders and came into this knowing a lot more than you, Mr. Detective!!!!!

(Edit) (Delete) (Reply)

view MistakeNPotatoes's profile

MistakeNPotatoes
18th Feb 2015, 12:19 PM

I know you're right, but I also know I'm 60 pages into this thing and I haven't had an action sequence since page 10, hahah! I'm really anxious, but I also know people can take a break and come back to it later if the slow pacing isn't quick enough to keep interest.

And yeah, Chase would benefit from trusting Clara a little more, he's starting to come around, though.

(Edit) (Delete) (Reply)

view Alicia's profile

Alicia
18th Feb 2015, 1:40 PM

Even when the pacing slows down a bit, you never lose my interest. I am excited to read what he has to say. :D (I like talking scenes like this.)

(Edit) (Delete) (Reply)

view MistakeNPotatoes's profile

MistakeNPotatoes
19th Feb 2015, 1:26 AM

Well, I'm glad. I'll try and hold everyone's interest XD

(Edit) (Delete) (Reply)

view Taily's profile

Taily
18th Feb 2015, 9:30 PM

Man, remember the halcyon days of red-hot room-booking action? That was the life.

(Edit) (Delete) (Reply)

view MistakeNPotatoes's profile

MistakeNPotatoes
19th Feb 2015, 1:27 AM

UGH, Taily, you know how to prey upon my fears. Exactly what I was thinking.

(Edit) (Delete) (Reply)

view Pivociarz's profile

Pivociarz
19th Feb 2015, 11:54 AM

Nah, I think having dialog is still good, but it could be better if it was really good writen, I don't say it's bad, but it could have more emotions or elements of humor in it, in pages like this people could put interaction between characters. Here is still really good.

(Edit) (Delete) (Reply)

view MistakeNPotatoes's profile

MistakeNPotatoes
20th Feb 2015, 1:30 PM

Thanks - I'm new to comics in general, I'm trying to build on writing, storytelling and art all at once, so I have a lot to learn about each. I'm glad to hear I'm making progress, though!

(Edit) (Delete) (Reply)

view zaika's profile

zaika
19th Feb 2015, 4:43 PM

Damn...now I have to wait. This is just getting better 'n better. :D

(Edit) (Delete) (Reply)

view MistakeNPotatoes's profile

MistakeNPotatoes
20th Feb 2015, 1:31 PM

Bwaha, I wish I could update more frequently, BELIEVE me.

(Edit) (Delete) (Reply)

view Skweeee's profile

Skweeee
19th Feb 2015, 6:04 PM

I think the pacing is great!

(Edit) (Delete) (Reply)

view MistakeNPotatoes's profile

MistakeNPotatoes
20th Feb 2015, 1:31 PM

Thank you, Skweeee :)

(Edit) (Delete) (Reply)

XMinusOne
20th Feb 2015, 12:25 PM

'Innsmouth' is one of my favorite of Lovecraft's novellas and IMO you're doing a fine job in continuing the Dagon/Cthulhu mythos in your comic. Your depiction of the human/Deep Ones hybrids is spot on as is the overall decay and degeneracy of the town itself. Keep up the good work.

(Edit) (Delete) (Reply)

Support me on Patreon!
The Webcomic List