Pt. 1 Ch. 2 - Page 11
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MistakeNPotatoes
4th Feb 2015, 11:18 AM

I feel bad about the coming pages because this is when I got into a kind of, super-down low productivity state, so these pages are kind of lazy and gross.

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Sleeper
4th Feb 2015, 11:55 AM

Cool page! Nice angles.

Don't worry about the next few. We all have slumps.

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Miaubol
4th Feb 2015, 5:06 PM

Hmmmm some interesting symbols there, on the bottom left.. ?

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rufiangel
4th Feb 2015, 10:46 PM

I second XibalbanSleeper - we all have slumps, no worries. :) It's as we struggle to draw stuff even while we're slumping that helps us grow, both as artists and people. XD;

Hmmm, a nautical map... don't suppose there'll be a big red X on it somewhere? XD

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MistakeNPotatoes
5th Feb 2015, 1:53 PM

Yeah, the biggest challenge has been drawing through the slump, it's hard, but it's sort of rewarding I guess - I just wish I could be inspired at all times, heh.

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ProfEtheric
5th Feb 2015, 12:35 AM

Nautical map, eh? I don't suppose it shows the way to a dead, sunken city or anything like that...

And don't worry about how the coming pages look to you. "Done is better than perfect", and you were working through a slump. :)

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MistakeNPotatoes
5th Feb 2015, 1:54 PM

Yeah, I definitely agree with the done is better than perfect mentality, but at the same time I don't want to have too much of a quality slip :I

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Pivociarz
5th Feb 2015, 5:06 AM

I hope nothing happens to them, I like them as much as Jakc, Jaunt adn Hugh.

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zaika
5th Feb 2015, 11:33 AM

Oh no...you had a slump too? :( Is this page part of that? 'Cause if it is, I'm not seeing the lazy gross part...

Also...MAPS! This oughta be good. :D

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Skweeee
5th Feb 2015, 12:07 PM

FFFffffffuuuuu.....

Amazing use of light and shadow on this page. You are good!

I'm going to have to work harder on my comic I think.

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MistakeNPotatoes
5th Feb 2015, 1:56 PM

Well gee, thanks man.

And obviously, you need to work harder - I need to work harder, we ALL need to work harder! Ascend! ASCEND!

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Holodrum
5th Feb 2015, 1:42 PM

Shadows in Panel 2 are wonderful, and is it just me or am I noticing more detailed backgrounds recently? :) Looken good.

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MistakeNPotatoes
5th Feb 2015, 1:57 PM

I'm glad you think so. I try to get balance between drawn backgrounds and filler backgrounds, I don't want to do too many of the latter.

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Taily
5th Feb 2015, 10:42 PM

I would actually be really okay with all of Chase's serious no-nonsense I'm-a-detective-on-the-case lines being interrupted by Clara shouting various things.

"We can't afford patience, Clara. Not here. We haven't found Irwin y--"
"I'VE GOT IT"

"They laughed me out of my office, Clara. Called me crazy. Said there was no such thing as--"
"MAN IT'S WARM OUT TODAY"

"I don't trust women, Clara. Not anymore. Not after that dame took my heart and--"
"HAHA, WHAT?? SORRY, I REALLY CAN'T HEAR YOU WHEN I'M EATING POTATO CHIPS"

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Jackarais
29th Jan 2018, 7:42 PM

Every time Chase says Clara's name I read it in the most condescending voice. I can't imagine anything else!

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