Pt. 1 Ch. 2 - Page 4

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MistakeNPotatoes
9th Jan 2015, 11:23 AM

Jack! We know a bit about Jaunt, we know a bit about Hugh, now it's Jack's turn to get the (hopefully tolerable) exposition treatment.

A visitor will be appearing in next week's page, though, so he doesn't have to talk to himself...

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ProfEtheric
9th Jan 2015, 11:59 AM

Yeah! Loving the page here, and getting a better look into Jack's POV!

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MistakeNPotatoes
9th Jan 2015, 12:09 PM

Yeh. I've had people thinking he was a badguy, or that he was going to get killed as early as page 18, I think. I readjusted the script so I could make him something more than just "the creepy pterodactyl thing that watches people."

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Vivocateur
9th Jan 2015, 1:37 PM

Really? Page 18?
Jack is one of my favourite characters so I'm glad you didn't :)

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MistakeNPotatoes
9th Jan 2015, 1:44 PM

Oh, no, Jack's in it for the long haul. It's just that people didn't know he was one of the main characters, even though he's featured on the main comic art, heheh.

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Taily
9th Jan 2015, 9:19 PM

Oh, come on, Jack. You know what makes Jaunt a leader, and it has nothing to do with some sort of "sense" - it's his fabulous poses. Just look at him. Look at that arched back; look at that form. Magnificent.

(glad we get to properly meet jack, tho. i can't get over his rakishly-tilted hat, LOOK AT THAT HAT)

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MistakeNPotatoes
9th Jan 2015, 9:51 PM

I think it's a living entity that knows which eye to cover at any given moment, only the art form of comics doesn't allow us to see it shifting around. I'll leave that up the reader...

but yeah, Jaunt's in the lead because he's the best poser. For reals.

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Taily
9th Jan 2015, 9:56 PM

Oh my god, it's like Mickey Mouse's ears.
Jack's hat needs a name. Flapjack?? (It's shaped like a wonky pancake and belongs to a Jack, what can I say)

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MistakeNPotatoes
9th Jan 2015, 10:11 PM

I think that's genius. Patent it, print it! We'll sell em by the ones!

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Memoria Caelestie
23rd Jan 2016, 12:49 PM

maybe jaunt is just fabulous than you that's all!

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