pt. 1 ch. 12 - Page 18
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MistakeNPotatoes
21st Dec 2018, 11:30 AM

Oh ho. Now how will this go? :)

I will be taking a break next week, I have a festive Jack pic I'll be posting on Christmas Eve, a request from one of my Patrons, so look forward to seeing a grumpy Byakhee ;)

Regular posting will begin again.. well, next year! On 1/2/19, specifically :)

Have a great weekend, and holiday!

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MadJak91
21st Dec 2018, 12:16 PM

If both brothers are present (finally) then the impact of such a meeting should be softened. At least I like when key people all finally meet and settle how it really is from now on.
That is what I was kind of hoping for previously, haha.

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Happy Holidays to you too and whatever derived expression you like as well :D

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Myetel
21st Dec 2018, 12:49 PM

Hmm. I thought they were still in the apartment supposedly occupied by the "scary man" that they'd thought was Nyar, and had its entrance foxed by the dimensional folding trap? How would Clara know where they were to meet them, and get past the foxing?

Also, eeep. That's the first time we've seen the EYES go like that.

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MistakeNPotatoes
21st Dec 2018, 2:51 PM

Ah, sorry - I think I didn't convey well enough with the previous scene with these characters that they had actually gone back to Chase's place. My bad!

Yeah, I was hoping for that last panel to be kinda creepy. I would try and execute it better if I were to do it again. Ah well!

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Mgnostic
21st Dec 2018, 2:20 PM

Irwin's look in the last panel is, well, eye catching. Irwin's expression in panel three is the one that really conveys some emotion though. Quite the cliff hanger, I suspect there will be some real drama in the new year.

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MistakeNPotatoes
21st Dec 2018, 2:49 PM

I wanted Irwin to look kinda spooky and difficult to read in that last panel - I hope that the drama upcoming is worth the wait! :)

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Bob Mozark
23rd Dec 2018, 11:18 AM

An interrupted moment. That much is clear.

Sometimes you just have to be patient and trust that the story will continue to develop, even if you don't fully understand all the present details.

Simply told stories are for preschoolers, which we are not.

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MistakeNPotatoes
27th Dec 2018, 5:25 PM

Ah, what was intended is Irwin is re-dressing after Roy had a chance to examine Thigg and their symbiotic relationship there :)

Thank you, though, I hope you had a wonderful Christmas, I'll see you next year!

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Andrew Holomshek
6th Jan 2019, 3:08 PM

Wait, didn't Jaunt cut off Irwin's right arm a few chapters ago? That hand in the last panel looks awful human to me.

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MistakeNPotatoes
6th Jan 2019, 4:04 PM

Oh my gosh. I forgot to put the glove on that hand, you're absolutely right. Welp! Time to fix that :')

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