Pt. 1 Ch. 1 - Page 22

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MistakeNPotatoes
14th Nov 2014, 11:14 AM

And so, our thrilling hotel room booking experience comes ever closer to an end!

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Sleeper
14th Nov 2014, 11:35 AM

Dammit Clara We're in fucking Innsmouth! You just got me robbed and or murdered.

I can't begin to imagine how mad I would be in this situation.

Love the effect on that first panel.

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MistakeNPotatoes
14th Nov 2014, 12:16 PM

Hahaha, yeah, he's not terribly pleased with the situation. Thank you - I'm trying to expand and vary the ways I fill in the panels I don't feel like drawing backgrounds on, haha.

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ProfEtheric
14th Nov 2014, 12:02 PM

"Okay, Clara. It's official. I don't have to be faster than (insert nameless horror from beyond time and space here), just faster than you."

Great page. I really like that texturing on the walls!

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MistakeNPotatoes
14th Nov 2014, 12:17 PM

*snerk* He's not THAT heartless!

And thanks, but these aren't intended to be walls, just me being lazy and filling in the blank space so it's not just a solid color behind them. Is there something I could be doing rather than this when I don't want to draw a background, you think? I've been pondering this recently...

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ProfEtheric
14th Nov 2014, 12:53 PM

I'm pretty lazy with a lot of my backgrounds, but I'm rather fond of a radial gradient from -color (out of space... see what I did there?) to black, giving a neat shadowy thing on the outer edges. What you did here actually looks (to me, anyway) like period-piece wallpaper.

All in all, when you don't want to do a background, find some neat effects in whatever program you're using. (*Braces for impact of "lazy artist" comments, even though I saw blatant copy-paste on one of the most amazingly drawn comics on the site...*)

Or, rather than effects, texturing. Or some very simple BG (like a couple of objects, just to keep it from being "in space").

Okay, I think I may officially be rambling at this point...

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Taily
14th Nov 2014, 6:16 PM

CHASE. WHAT EVEN IS IT WITH YOU AND LUGGAGE, MAN.

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MistakeNPotatoes
14th Nov 2014, 9:31 PM

There's important things in there, GAWD.

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Destiny_Llama
14th Nov 2014, 7:05 PM

Chase is probably gonna take a good long while making his way upstairs isn't he. And he's going to glare at the innkeeper the entire time. Never breaking eye contact. Until he doesn't watch where he's stepping and falls when he's halfway up the stairs.

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MistakeNPotatoes
14th Nov 2014, 9:31 PM

I can totally see that in my head, bwahaha.

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Call Me Tom
15th Nov 2014, 3:05 AM

I think he just dosen't want to tip the clerk!

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MistakeNPotatoes
15th Nov 2014, 11:13 AM

Well why would he? 10 dollars for a night in a hotel? Jeez!

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Proxy170
15th Nov 2014, 6:59 AM

That's like telling a kid not to touch something...just makes them want to touch it more...lol

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MistakeNPotatoes
15th Nov 2014, 11:13 AM

Maybe he's counting on it!?

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Outlaw
15th Nov 2014, 2:23 PM

Let's see how well he remember his words.

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MistakeNPotatoes
16th Nov 2014, 9:37 AM

Yeah, the creep!

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zaika
15th Nov 2014, 5:20 PM

I don't blame Chase...why doesn't he just handcuff himself to the case... LOL

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MistakeNPotatoes
16th Nov 2014, 9:36 AM

It's heavy D:

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zaika
17th Nov 2014, 2:46 PM

Oooohhhh...see I haven't read this particular short story, so I have no idea. ;)

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MistakeNPotatoes
17th Nov 2014, 3:00 PM

Oh no, these characters and events are all mine, they're just inspired by the short story :) There was no Chekov's Case in The Shadow Over Innsmouth.

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zaika
17th Nov 2014, 4:35 PM

Lmao Chekov really gets around.

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MistakeNPotatoes
17th Nov 2014, 4:38 PM

It's one of my favorite Literary terms, sorry, gahaha

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zaika
17th Nov 2014, 4:53 PM

I love it. Mostly because I always envision the baby faced Chekhov from Star Trek and it makes me giggle.

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MistakeNPotatoes
17th Nov 2014, 5:12 PM

"Kyapten! They weel not welease the case!"

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Memoria Caelestie
22nd Jan 2016, 11:37 AM

hmmmmmmmmmmmm what is in that luggage chase! is it your underwear with flower pattern you don't people to see!

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