pt. 1 ch. 10 - Page 20
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MistakeNPotatoes
24th Jan 2018, 11:30 AM

Dun dun dun. Mostly happy with the top right panel on this one, the rest I could take or leave =p

I'm gonna try to get back into the groove of replying to comments, guys, it's just been really hard for me, recently. I'm sorry. I love and appreciate all of you, and I do mean that.

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Mada
24th Jan 2018, 1:11 PM

Non-humans trying to figure out human things is always fun :)

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MistakeNPotatoes
26th Jan 2018, 12:57 PM

Haha, or at least trying to rationalize WHY WOULD YOU WANT TO BE INSIDE OF A THING LIKE THAT?

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MadJak91
24th Jan 2018, 2:37 PM

It is cool, Jack. It is a university. They are confusing even for humans. Heh.
Or just a monster's perspective. When I saw one of their homeworlds back when Jaunt visited the bar, it seemed even busier and helluva lot confusing than our towns...

I do not think Jack is planning anything dangerous. Hm. He is not dumb to attack anyone in broad daylight in a public place like school.
But... How good are his abilities? Can he enter the building and run around cloaked as well? Or does he need to stay outside just to be sure? I know he is still probably physical...

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MistakeNPotatoes
26th Jan 2018, 12:59 PM

Aren't they, though!?

Ah yeah, I'm sure Jack would be pretty irritated by Yizix as well - he would prefer to just stay in a nest or some uncomplicated space :)

In terms of Jack's plan and capabilities... we'll have to see... :D

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Thracecius
24th Jan 2018, 3:12 PM

Profile shots are always easier to like when they turn out as you plan (or better), but the rest of the panels look fine to me, especially panels 2 (Jack stretched out), 6 (spyglasses Jack) and 8 (Clara having a psychic moment that Jack is seeing through the window? nice lighting to illustrate that!). Just keep posting and I'll keep reading, 'cause you're doing great! :)

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MistakeNPotatoes
26th Jan 2018, 1:00 PM

Ah, thanks - I'm glad that you like it at least. I just see everything that went wrong in everything, haha :)

Clara's actually meant to be shaking her hair out from under the hat and straightening it, but without motion lines I guess that didn't come across very well, sorry :(

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a.c.i.d.
25th Jan 2018, 7:27 AM

The panel that I love is the one with Jack using the binoculars. It looks awesome! ^.^ I really hope things get better for you soon. Please hang in there!

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MistakeNPotatoes
26th Jan 2018, 1:00 PM

Hey, thanks man :) on both fronts!

It'll get there, just have to make it through for now, you know?

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a.c.i.d.
27th Jan 2018, 6:13 AM

Yeah. Dunno if it can be of any consolation, but I'm over here rooting for you. ^.^b

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Bob Mozark
25th Jan 2018, 10:27 AM

Nice art work on conveying the twilight of dusk without making it too dark to see what is going on.

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Taily
29th Jan 2018, 8:11 PM

I like Jack's little bit of poetry in the third panel, he should take that to the stage! I also like Clara shaking out her MAJESTIC MANE

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MistakeNPotatoes
7th Feb 2018, 12:56 PM

Do you think he could out-poem Faustus?

Haha, nevermind, stupid question :D Of course he could.

And I'm glad that came across, that last panel confused some people it seems :')

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