pt. 1 ch. 10 - Page 7
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MistakeNPotatoes
8th Dec 2017, 11:35 AM

Another week comes to a close. Thank you everyone for stopping by, and have a great weekend!

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MadJak91
8th Dec 2017, 12:18 PM

Holy snaps! Was there a situation when Jaunt did not act classy as eff around his subordinates after a major failure? I have to give him credit. He NEVER takes anything out on his boys. Ever. He is a good leader. He knows his screw ups. I guess humans are just naturally emotional and competitive since they do not live as long in comparison. No time for screw ups.

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MadJak91
10th Dec 2017, 4:13 PM

Haha, thanks!!
I said this once a long time ago (gosh, still feels like yesterday) but the dynamic is cool. I have no idea how hard it is in terms or writing but the comic is pretty consistent in how it wants to show monsters and humans. Both the good and the bad.

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MistakeNPotatoes
13th Dec 2017, 3:19 PM

Ah, thanks you guys :) I always try to strike that balance, for sure. I don't want anyone to be too good, I don't want anyone to be too monstrous. I'm always happy to hear when I'm kinda getting there :)

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Microraptor
8th Dec 2017, 1:58 PM

"...and your FBI codenames will be Mulder and Scully!"
"Do... these names have any significance?"
"Nah, I just made them up on the fly."

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MistakeNPotatoes
13th Dec 2017, 3:20 PM

They're almost like a swapped Mulder and Scully where Clara is educated and non-skeptical and Chase is not as well educated but extremely skeptical :D

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warp9
8th Dec 2017, 3:54 PM

Thanks for continuing to make this comic!

Keep up the good work!

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Mgnostic
8th Dec 2017, 6:27 PM

Yes, What about Clara. It will be interesting to see how the agent responds. She's not exactly a wilting flower.

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Taily
8th Dec 2017, 11:08 PM

Oh my STARS, Jaunt comes down with a case of the VAPORS in panel 3.

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Ahakarin
13th Dec 2017, 12:20 AM

Congratulations.

Prior to this comment, I always read Jaunt's dialog in something dark, but classy - Christopher Lee or Vincent Price.

... Now he is Foghorn Leghorn.

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MistakeNPotatoes
13th Dec 2017, 3:21 PM

Oh god, no. Taily is really good at making Jaunt sound like Hanna Barbera cartoon characters it seems like :I

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Bob Mozark
10th Dec 2017, 9:46 AM

I would think twice about being deputized, Clara. Being a consultant or confidential informant would suit you better.

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That Guy Over There
11th Dec 2017, 8:10 PM

*Alternate Dialogue For This Page*
Jaunt: You could do me a huge favor, though...
Albert: What do you need?
Jaunt: Can you fetch a block of ice for me? That sweet ensemble you're wearing is giving me the vapors.

(Honestly, who here was expecting Jaunt to say 'Give me your clothes' on panel 4? Al is seriously well dressed for a fish-guy here. I honestly wonder if Albert might be wearing some of Jaunt's hand-me-downs.)

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MistakeNPotatoes
13th Dec 2017, 3:23 PM

Oh gosh XD It seems a few people went there, heheh, I was concerned about it coming across that way.

Al used to be fairly well-to-do, and still probably is, but money won't mean as much to him for too much longer. I doubt the outfit would fit Jaunt too well, though, he's a bit taller and has little spiney things and such :D

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