Pt. 1 Ch. 1 - Page 18
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MistakeNPotatoes
31st Oct 2014, 12:48 PM

Heh, well, I might not seem so clever but that line is actually my way of saying I'm going to trim a bit of the fat. I LOVE the way Lovecraft writes and I adore his stories, but he does go a bit into detail about things that don't necessarily enhance the story, or could have been conveyed more efficiently.

On top of that, this is intended to be a little more lighthearted and action oriented, so I want the visuals to speak for themselves and not subtract from the narrative with explanations of old buildings, and such. There's also the fact that my descriptive writing is not particularly great, heh.

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ProfEtheric
31st Oct 2014, 1:08 PM

I didn't actually expect you to spill what she was going to say... I was just commenting that yes, Lovecraft would probably have spent several paragraphs explaining things. I think that is part of the reason his worldview sticks around to this day.

I probably shouldn't be posting comments today (sleep-deprived), but it's fun, so...

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zaika
1st Nov 2014, 12:06 AM

Yeah, I wanna hear her observations! lol She seems sassy...

I've never read this story before...but I think I'm going to have to now.

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MistakeNPotatoes
1st Nov 2014, 9:19 AM

She certainly has a strong personality, hahaha.

And I recommend it - the story I'm telling here is different enough that it's its own thing, but I don't think I'll ever do Lovecraft's writing justice.

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AAABatteries
4th Nov 2014, 4:10 PM

I finally got around to reading this comic and I really like what I'm seeing so far! This is a neat concept, and your style looks awesome.

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