pt. 1 ch. 9 - Page 27

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MistakeNPotatoes
22nd Sep 2017, 10:30 AM

Here's a scene I've been looking forward to getting to! :D Hopefully it's a little more visually interesting than the last one, sorry about that business.

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Myetel
22nd Sep 2017, 12:31 PM

Why, fancy meeting you here, of all people. Do you smell a trap at all? Why no, no, any whiff of that is covered by the odor of alley garbage. . . .

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MistakeNPotatoes
27th Sep 2017, 10:29 AM

Hahaha! Yeah, not the most glamorous spot to wait XD

Maybe she suspects something about the door..

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Mgnostic
22nd Sep 2017, 1:03 PM

Clara is almost certainly taller but her dress resembles some that I have seen in photos of Bonnie Parker.

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MistakeNPotatoes
27th Sep 2017, 10:30 AM

Oh my :D

Now that you mention it they do have similar dress sense, don't they?

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Microraptor
22nd Sep 2017, 1:15 PM

Sorry, Jaunt without shirt on, but I stills think Clara is way more pleasing to the eye!

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MistakeNPotatoes
27th Sep 2017, 10:30 AM

I think you'd get a lot of people to agree with you on that XD

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Holodrum
22nd Sep 2017, 2:13 PM

Clara!! The best Clara since Ms. Oswald.

Love the outfit.

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MistakeNPotatoes
27th Sep 2017, 10:31 AM

Always good to see her again, right? And I'm glad you dig the dress :D

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MadJak91
22nd Sep 2017, 3:19 PM

That is too convenient and obvious even for a guy like Roy. I suspect him because he invited Chase. Maybe.

Also, that green coat was nice on Clara but... this is nicer :>

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MistakeNPotatoes
27th Sep 2017, 10:31 AM

These two should definitely be suspicious of the situation. That could just be how Roy operates, though...

I'm glad you like the dress, too :D

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Bob Mozark
23rd Sep 2017, 8:42 AM

Nice pacing of the story with the panels above. Good use of alternating points of view, also.

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MistakeNPotatoes
27th Sep 2017, 10:32 AM

Thank you! I felt like the pacing on this page was pretty good :)

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...(RockB)
24th Sep 2017, 12:47 AM

Eyebrows :D

(Very nice job with the "cutting". Feels like "just as it should be.")

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MistakeNPotatoes
27th Sep 2017, 10:32 AM

Nice! I'm glad that the cinematography worked here :)

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That Guy Over There
24th Sep 2017, 2:36 PM

Pretty sure that this is a trap. But the question is, is this a trap for them, or for the guy who's stalking them? Jack's eager to go for the kill, and the low hanging fruit is right there for the plucking...

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MistakeNPotatoes
27th Sep 2017, 10:33 AM

So many people are suspicious of a trap, I love it :D

We'll have to see...

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Jaunt in a top hat?

Siva
25th Sep 2017, 3:49 PM

I just caught up on this comic, thought I had seen an image of Jaunt in a top hat, but it appears to not be in the comic proper. Does it exist?

This comment has nothing to do with the comic as it is, but if you need an idea for a filler panel, I'd like to request one of Jaunt in his dapper human-style outfit - and a top hat?

Thank you for reading this, even if that's as far as this goes!

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MistakeNPotatoes
27th Sep 2017, 10:35 AM

I actually have never drawn Jaunt in a top hat before! Once for a sketch request from one of my patrons I drew him with a bowler on but I don't think I've posted that anywhere yet...

While this is the case, you're not the only person who remembers seeing him with a top hat! Maybe he just seems like the sort who would be wearing one? Or maybe there's secret fan art I don't know about? :D

I don't think it'll be a problem accommodating the desire for Jaunt in a top hat, though! Please give me a bit and I'll gladly put one up, maybe for the next chapter break? :)

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Taily
4th Oct 2017, 3:38 PM

Clara's outfit is so cute!! How long has she been staring at that door haha

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MistakeNPotatoes
5th Oct 2017, 1:25 PM

I'm glad you think so! And I like to think she just started looking at it, haha XD

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Memoria Caelestie
11th Oct 2017, 8:59 PM

aw clara looks real cute here!

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MistakeNPotatoes
12th Oct 2017, 11:15 PM

I thought it was a cute outfit!! :D

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