pt. 1 ch. 9 - Page 22
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MistakeNPotatoes
6th Sep 2017, 10:30 AM

I hope people are having a good week - I had to get up early today so I'm going straight back to bed. Enjoy the page!

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Teslaverian
6th Sep 2017, 10:33 AM

That color palette is crazy! I love it.

Your visual effects are really cool~

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MistakeNPotatoes
6th Sep 2017, 9:32 PM

I wish I could get away with such madness more often XD

Thank you though, that's high praise from you!

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Bob Mozark
6th Sep 2017, 10:54 AM

That clearly took a toll on Jaunt, but he is glad that he got the information from Jack, so it is worth the cost.

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Mr. Casual
6th Sep 2017, 11:06 AM

Something I've always noticed and it made me wonder.

Does Jaunt have eyelids over the monocle? Definitely makes for more expressiveness, but that's a damn strange adaptation, heh.

Of course, "strange" is relative in this universe. X)

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MistakeNPotatoes
6th Sep 2017, 9:35 PM

He doesn't, no! The monocle itself makes the physical adjustment, which is purely a holdout from the days I was trying to make it a cartoon. I let myself have it, because expressiveness is WAY harder without, heh!

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Sturzkampf
6th Sep 2017, 2:10 PM

Jaunt forgot to mention that he needs a new shirt and jacket when Jack gets back.

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Mgnostic
6th Sep 2017, 2:46 PM

Good to see that Jaunt hasn't forgotten his pound of flesh. I'm looking forward to seeing what he does with it.

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MistakeNPotatoes
6th Sep 2017, 9:37 PM

Ah yes, he has remembered at least that much :)

I'd wager there's plenty you can do with some flesh of your foe..

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Taily
6th Sep 2017, 3:27 PM

Jack makes me feel some unexpectedly poignant emotions and I hope he gets a good rest. Sleep well Jacko.

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MistakeNPotatoes
6th Sep 2017, 9:40 PM

He would if he could, but he's got some scouting to do :(

I'm really feeling Jack these days, too, heh. Get some good rest, Taily! :)

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dougwarner59
7th Sep 2017, 10:46 AM

I like the way you made the communication between them in the weird dimension.

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Myetel
7th Sep 2017, 12:29 PM

I'm actually loving the orange connectors and such. At first, I thought it was a visualization of the city streets where Jack's at, a mental map transmitted to Jaunt of where our intrepid investigator has holed up. Then, I started to see it as the construct linking their thoughts.

[And metaphorically, it's a gameboard, on which they're all pawns. But hey. . . ]

Really effective, and a nice change of colors for variety!

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MistakeNPotatoes
8th Sep 2017, 2:14 PM

Ooh, that would've made sense. I'm using it as just some sort of loose representation of thoughtways and patterns. I.E. it doesn't make sense, heh.

I'm glad it worked so well for you, and yes, I LOVE using colors like this!

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MadJak91
8th Sep 2017, 3:21 PM

I am curious what possible goals might Jaunt have with Chase. Things happened, Jaunt learned a bit about the artefact. Other than revenge... Hm. You cannot get much mystic info out of humans.

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MistakeNPotatoes
11th Sep 2017, 10:44 AM

It's not revenge, he wants to take out what he sees as a potential threat that will uncover what's going on in Innsmouth to the rest of the local human population. He's trying to stop that before it happens :)

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