pt. 1 ch. 9 - Page 11
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MistakeNPotatoes
28th Jul 2017, 10:30 AM

Looks like someone caught a break :)

Speaking of catching a break, I finally have my application for the animation studio submitted so I can get back to focusing strictly on the comic!

If you want to chat with other readers and myself about whatever,
come join us on discord! :)

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Microraptor
28th Jul 2017, 10:55 AM

That's not how to hold binoculars, Jack! Didn't Jaunt teach you anything!?

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Guest
28th Jul 2017, 11:34 AM

I think it's his impressive honker getting in the way.

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crowwinters
28th Jul 2017, 11:57 AM

i love the effect that cloak is pulling on jack.

this page is so cool looking aahhh

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Zach
28th Jul 2017, 12:01 PM

Not gonna lie - I'm currently writing my own graphic novel series. And if I'd ever planned on drawing it too, something like this is how I'd pull off an invisibility effect.

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warp9
28th Jul 2017, 12:13 PM

It's a good thing that Jack doesn't think "all humans look alike." That would have made his mission a bit more complicated.

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MistakeNPotatoes
28th Jul 2017, 4:34 PM

No joke, right!? Maybe there's an element of that to his personality, but I guess he took a real good mental picture of the guy that almost killed him.

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Myetel
28th Jul 2017, 12:48 PM

I'll echo all the praise on the invisibility effect--it's just lovely as he dissolves into the sunset. I do wonder when someone will put together the connection between the two male humies giving them all these problems. . .

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MistakeNPotatoes
28th Jul 2017, 4:35 PM

Thank you as well! I need to refine it some more but I'm glad it's coming across :D

Yeah, the connection should be made at some point you'd think!

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Myetel
31st Jul 2017, 1:04 PM

I mean, all our fishy hero--er, protagonists--er, characters with whom our sympathies occasionally lie . . . started off human before changing. They should, I think, be able to recognize facial similarity and bright red hair still isn't all that common. I look forward to seeing for whom the penny drops first.

I'm betting Hugh. He's got to show that he has qualities more important than being large and gentle. :)

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MadJak91
28th Jul 2017, 12:52 PM

Hopefully Jack is the right guy for the job. Considering what happened to him in the past, I would understand if he were to act on impulse and wanted payback :/

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Slim Kittens
28th Jul 2017, 5:42 PM

Meanwhile, Jaunt is getting a world-class chewing out and the doctors are saying, "What the hell is this???"

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MistakeNPotatoes
2nd Aug 2017, 11:53 AM

Hah! That's about right. All Jack's got going on is some surveillance and some past-prime bird meat XD

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Blockround
29th Jul 2017, 12:46 PM

jack et chickn yum and turn
invisable sooosh and chase
shuld go run away

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Mr. Casual
29th Jul 2017, 10:41 PM

Hah, the joke's on you, Jack! As anyone who's keen to the Mythos will tell you, you don't feel safe anywhere.

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Taily
31st Jul 2017, 6:48 PM

Jacko's got a snacko!! I love how he holds the binos :') the art on this page is delicious!

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MistakeNPotatoes
2nd Aug 2017, 11:55 AM

Whacko Jacko has a snacko on his backo!

I thought people would dig the binoc use ;) thank you! I was super happy with how the art came out here.

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