Pt. 1 Ch. 8 - Page 25
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MistakeNPotatoes
12th May 2017, 10:30 AM

Not as exciting as the previous page, action-wise, but I think the coming pages will be enjoyed :)

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Mrbagoguts
12th May 2017, 10:37 AM

Just wanted to say I always look forward to seeing what happens next you have truly created something great keep up the good work.

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MistakeNPotatoes
13th May 2017, 11:01 AM

Aw, gee - thank you so much, it makes me happy that people like it :) comments like these help keep me going, that's for sure!

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Holodrum
12th May 2017, 11:16 AM

And the Awesome continues

Nice view of the bullet, good exposition, and that look of fear in the last panel is sweet.

I want to retract my statement from a few pages ago, when I said the bullet panel was a little confusing. With how this scene has played out, it's perfectly ok for that panel to be a little confusing. I dare say Jaunt is rather confused about it at first, so leaving the people like myself a little confused as well makes for a nice synergy. And it makes Jaunt's exposition on this page "relevatory" instead of redundant.

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MistakeNPotatoes
13th May 2017, 11:02 AM

I'm glad it paid off - that's the weird thing about doing a comic so SLOWLY like a webcomic is that you feel like the finished product makes sense but as the pages come out you run into little issues - I feel like you were totally correct, so don't even worry about it :)

Thank you, too!

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Mgnostic
12th May 2017, 11:04 PM

I don't know about calling in allies but I wouldn't be surprised if the fireworks have rippled the etheric continuum. Who knows what they have attracted.

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MistakeNPotatoes
13th May 2017, 11:16 AM

I do wonder how something like that has to look to interdimensional beings from the outside.

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Mgnostic
13th May 2017, 5:34 PM

A dinner gong for our favorite angular hounds. That might be bad for all concerned.

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Anon
13th May 2017, 7:00 AM

The shape of the projectile...

...now looks a little like an anchor. Clever.

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MadJak91
13th May 2017, 11:58 AM

Fish-man! But that is like racist to them, right? :D

Oh! I just recalled when Irwin had that weird breakdown because Thigg did something to him. His had turned into a monster fang or something like that. Is that what is going to happen? I forgot about it and if Irwin mastered something like a monster form then yeah, that would be the Hugh counter.

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MistakeNPotatoes
18th May 2017, 2:41 PM

Maybe? XD I figured it might be construed as vaguely offensive..

And yes... as nice as Thigg has been so far, we do know he has a bit of an angle because he put Irwin under to... do things. I wouldn't completely trust him yet :)

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junoro
15th May 2017, 12:09 AM

I have a feeling that Irwin is going to be punched in the face. It's just a feeling... I like the stakes in this fight! It'll be cool to see how everyone ends up afterwards!

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MistakeNPotatoes
18th May 2017, 2:41 PM

You have good instinct ;D

And thank you! I'm glad that there are stakes, I know some people have trouble establishing those before fighting begins :')

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keltyzoid!
19th May 2017, 11:49 AM

i also really like his anime pose in the third-to-last panel. Hugh's Bizarre Adventure.

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