Pt. 1 Ch. 8 - Page 16

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MistakeNPotatoes
12th Apr 2017, 10:30 AM

Ohhh... well gee.

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Microraptor
12th Apr 2017, 10:49 AM

The way how motion is implied in panel 4 is cool!

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MistakeNPotatoes
12th Apr 2017, 4:26 PM

Thank you so much! I was hoping it came across well :)

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Mgnostic
12th Apr 2017, 11:16 AM

Good Job on the artwork. The dynamic poses and the shadows work well as does the tie between panels one and two. One would presume that the weapon has been optimized for an attack on Jaunt.

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MistakeNPotatoes
12th Apr 2017, 4:27 PM

Thanks! I really liked some of the aspects of the art on this page :) I like this new arena, much more interesting than a flat purple space, haha!

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Sturzkampf
12th Apr 2017, 12:11 PM

I don't care what Universe you're from. That's gotta hurt.

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MistakeNPotatoes
12th Apr 2017, 4:27 PM

Welcome To Paintown, population Jaunt

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Vivocateur
12th Apr 2017, 1:52 PM

Oooh! Ouch!

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MistakeNPotatoes
12th Apr 2017, 4:27 PM

No joke! :'D

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Agent Cheshire
12th Apr 2017, 1:52 PM

Mmm whatcha saaay

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MistakeNPotatoes
12th Apr 2017, 4:28 PM

Sick Imogen Heap reference bruh

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Agent Cheshire
15th Apr 2017, 1:23 PM

Thanks bruh

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Epiale
12th Apr 2017, 3:15 PM

Gorgeous page, holy crap, but JAUNT NO

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MistakeNPotatoes
12th Apr 2017, 4:28 PM

Thank you, and oh yes >:D

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Bob Mozark
13th Apr 2017, 9:23 AM

Lots of action! Very dynamic artwork.

Chase had better hope that there are no rocks within Hugh's reach!

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MistakeNPotatoes
13th Apr 2017, 11:17 AM

Thank you!

And yeah, Hugh might be fairly protected, but he doesn't have range...

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Mr. Casual
13th Apr 2017, 10:35 AM

Interesting. Jaunt looked like he was standing beside Hugh at the start. In the last panel, he's standing in front of him, covering him from the shot. Now that's a boss who cares.

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MistakeNPotatoes
13th Apr 2017, 11:17 AM

Honestly that wasn't entirely intentional - just rotation weirdness, also Hugh is supposed to be sitting up from his position in panel 2.

Actually, I meant to hint specifically that Jaunt tried to phase out to avoid the shot - you can see the green sparks coming off him in his failed attempt to avoid the shot :)

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gideonland
13th Apr 2017, 7:23 PM

Nooo. Kinda chose a bad time to catch up. See our mans getting ambushed and shot! Looks painful.

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MistakeNPotatoes
18th May 2017, 2:44 PM

Oh my gosh I apparently forgot to respond to the comments on this page? I feel bad :I

And yeah, I would hate catching up just to reach a page like this for sure XD

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TheStratovarian
13th Apr 2017, 10:27 PM

I like that hugh bumbling out manages to dodge the shot aimed for jaunt there. And the other, the sounds here add a lovely dynamic to this panel. Along with the actual recoil we see this gun having. And yikes, jaunt is not having a good time getting up from that.

It should be very interesting what hugh does instinctively in the next page.

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MistakeNPotatoes
18th May 2017, 2:45 PM

Thank you, I'm glad that a lot of these things came across. It's a constant fear of mine that these elements won't work out or pay off :)

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That Guy Over There
14th Apr 2017, 2:44 AM

Ouch. Right in the Squeedlyspooch.

Invader Zim reference, in celebration to Nickelodeon announcing that they'd be bringing the show back.

Well, here's hoping that isn't a vital organ... if he has organs. Or maybe his organs aren't inside of him: He can bend space-time at will, maybe an autopsy would show dozens of tiny portals connecting to his organs which are all located in a pocket dimension, safe from things like gunshot wounds.

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MistakeNPotatoes
18th May 2017, 2:46 PM

Yeah, got him right in the [vaguely discernable anatomy] - oh, that's Invader Zim? I'm sad I never watched that show :(

I'm sad I failed to comment back when you did because now we see the sinister design of this bullet, so anything I say is just filler... so hi :D

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Twilight
14th Apr 2017, 9:02 AM

Just not your day, Jaunt! First getting beat up by bugs, now getting shot by JeepersCreepersTakeALookAtThosePeepers. XD

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MistakeNPotatoes
18th May 2017, 2:46 PM

Yeah Jaunt is having a really, REALLY bad week :')

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Gluma
16th May 2017, 2:36 AM

Yeah, I like the dinamism in last panels too.

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MistakeNPotatoes
18th May 2017, 2:46 PM

Ah, thank you so much! :D

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Taily
9th Jun 2017, 11:14 AM

Oh god!! Right in the solar plexus!!

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MistakeNPotatoes
9th Jun 2017, 11:16 AM

Roundabouts there, yeh D:

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