Pt. 1 Ch. 1 - Page 08

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MistakeNPotatoes
26th Sep 2014, 10:46 AM

I'm usually pretty good with perspective, but ouch that last panel. Oh well! Onward and upward.

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dpat57
26th Sep 2014, 11:20 AM

I didn't think it was bad, don't beat yourself up! Good stuff, things progress. SHE IS GETTING ON THE BUS OMG.

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MistakeNPotatoes
26th Sep 2014, 12:02 PM

I know it's like plot is happening :D Thanks for the vote of confidence, I appreciate it.

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Alicia
26th Sep 2014, 12:15 PM

Yes, a very difficult perspective to draw! But you pulled it off nicely! (I try not to set myself up with these situations. It's probably why my comic has all of these boring angles and I never get better at drawing. XD)

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MistakeNPotatoes
27th Sep 2014, 1:58 AM

Well, I disagree, I think if you go from page one of Silver to your most recent you can definitely see the improvement ;)
I appreciate it, though, all we can do is try better next time.

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ProfEtheric
26th Sep 2014, 12:48 PM

The angle there is totes fine. You pulled it off better than I would have.

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MistakeNPotatoes
27th Sep 2014, 1:59 AM

Thank you, man - remind me I need to figure out how to share your comic on my page. I am not good at computer.

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IllustratorMan
30th Sep 2014, 10:05 PM

Way to end strong with that last panel! Not always easy to do but you nailed it. Loving your animated style shading as well!

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MistakeNPotatoes
1st Oct 2014, 11:36 AM

Heh, thanks. Though I wonder if I could catch a workshop/mentor session with people who are much better at constructing backgrounds, someday.

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Sleeper
1st Oct 2014, 3:37 PM

I didn't notice the perspective thing until you pointed it out. Every page is a learning experience.

God I love this series.

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MistakeNPotatoes
1st Oct 2014, 4:59 PM

I'll be sure to call out all the things I don't like about my pages then so you can see them. Nah, mebbe I'll just keep my mouth shut from here on, heh.

Thank you though, I hope you continue to like it as the weeks progress :)

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msouth
25th May 2016, 4:16 PM

I think it's "who" in that case--"whom" is the objective, so "to whom" or "you hit whom?". But "who needs", because "who" is the subject that "needs".

Not an expert, so maybe check, but I think that's how it works.

Mnemonic: "who is kidding whom?" who=subject whom=object.

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MistakeNPotatoes
25th May 2016, 4:35 PM

Hey, thanks for the grammunition :'D

Oh god I had to look at this page to read this comment. Please continue reading to the current pages the art gets much better XD

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CKaj
6th Jun 2016, 7:27 PM

Yup!

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MistakeNPotatoes
6th Jun 2016, 7:36 PM

I need to remember to get on this.

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