Pt. 1 Ch. 7 - Page 10
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MistakeNPotatoes
5th Nov 2016, 9:32 AM

Hahaha, alright, I can roll with this XD

And yeah! Jack takes breaks from the story it seems like, heh...

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HeSerpenty
4th Nov 2016, 1:42 PM

Whenever someone says something is safe... I immediately start thinking it's not safe at all X"D

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sigpig
4th Nov 2016, 4:13 PM

Are you kidding? Clara's got the MOB looking out for her now...

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MadJak91
4th Nov 2016, 3:35 PM

Heh. You can say Jack is REALLY feeling the debt his owes.
During the next meeting, everyone is going to be freaking prepared and trained :D
I would invest into bullet-proof equip though...

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MistakeNPotatoes
5th Nov 2016, 9:34 AM

For sure :D At least I'm not showing a montage I guess?

Pfft, Jack ain't gonna get shot up quite so easily again.. also wait, wasn't bullet proof stuff of the era like, actual metal suits?

I remember people used to wear full metal armor in WW1...

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MistakeNPotatoes
5th Nov 2016, 10:04 AM

Aah, thanks :D I like that people are picking him as a fave, I tried to make him pretty relatable. Him and Hugh, really.

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Bob Mozark
5th Nov 2016, 9:07 AM

I can tell that Jack is determined to give a better account of himself the next time Jaunt needs his services.

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That Guy Over There
7th Nov 2016, 3:30 AM

This I like. You wouldn't expect creatures who exist beyond our narrow preconceptions of space and time to be exercising, training for their next fight. And you certainly wouldn't expect something with toe claws fit to shame a raptor to be practicing with a razor. Then again, it makes sense: Getting gutted by a "wild animal" is unlikely to pass by unnoticed in a city, but getting cut up "by some nut with a razor"? Happens every day in New York and twice on sundays, amiright?

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MistakeNPotatoes
8th Nov 2016, 12:27 PM

Hey, thank you for the comment :D

This is a cool observation, heheh - you're absolutely right, a slashing would look a lot less suspicious than a claw or a bite. Overall though, honing your abilities so you have more options in combat overall is never a bad idea in his position :)

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John Mandrake
8th Nov 2016, 2:49 PM

Suggestion

I think it would be interesting if one of the human characters became one of the nonhuman characters in the story at some point. Could you do that?

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MistakeNPotatoes
8th Nov 2016, 3:09 PM

Ha ha! I appreciate the suggestion - I make a policy of not commenting on speculation in order to avoid a "I can neither confirm or deny" sort of situation, but I would like you to know it is appreciated :)

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Taily
27th Nov 2016, 1:30 PM

Aaah Clara clearly you do not go to campuses in my time period or city also HOLY GOD HI THERE JACK WATCH WHERE YOU'RE SWINGING THAT THING BUDDY

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MistakeNPotatoes
28th Nov 2016, 12:56 PM

Oh no, chauvinist advances were commonplace back then! That's not a threat at all :D

And hah! Smash cut to STABBIN. I thought it was fun.

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Taily
28th Nov 2016, 4:06 PM

Oh man I was talking more about the frequent stabbings and muggings that happen at my campus but ABSOLUTELY gross men are a problem too

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MistakeNPotatoes
28th Nov 2016, 4:16 PM

Oh right D: I guess that does happen too these days, doesn't it.

WELP, gross people either way :D

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