Pt. 1 Ch. 7 - Page 8

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MistakeNPotatoes
28th Oct 2016, 10:40 AM

Aaaagh problems with word balloons again. This is what I get for trying to blaze through as much dialogue as I can manage on one page :')

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azureXtwilight
28th Oct 2016, 10:50 AM

To be honest, I think the word balloons on the page is perfectly fine.

Wonder what Clara found out?

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MistakeNPotatoes
28th Oct 2016, 1:27 PM

Ah, thank you :D

And we'll have to wait to see, heheheh :)

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Skweeee
28th Oct 2016, 12:31 PM

I think your word balloons are fine. Nothing stuck out to me before I read your author's note. Plus, your vision of The Great Cthulhu is solid.

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MistakeNPotatoes
28th Oct 2016, 1:49 PM

Hey thanks :D Glad it wasn't too distracting, then.

And I appreciate it >:D I like to think every artist that draws or sculpts C'thulhu in the mythos creates a visage that is altered by their own perspective, so they end up looking slightly different amongst everyone.

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HeSerpenty
28th Oct 2016, 1:30 PM

Aw man I just LOVE this different black n white style for this scene-- beautifully rendered!

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MistakeNPotatoes
30th Oct 2016, 9:43 PM

Thank you! I do like trying new things, always happy when they work :)

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MadJak91
28th Oct 2016, 3:26 PM

Yeah. I still suspect the Don because the last panel probably is not courtesy... I have nothing relevant to pin on him though. Could be just really interested in this. Wanting a piece of that mystery cracked as well. Cool guy actually.

Good of you to give Clara some screen to be honest. The muscle did his job, the brain now needs to think about the next step!

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MistakeNPotatoes
30th Oct 2016, 9:44 PM

It could be... maybe he's a not so bad guy that's tied up in bad work? Time may tell...

And yeah! I can't wait to get Clara more on the forefront, Chase did his job, now she gets to put her knowledge to use :D

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lorddarke
29th Oct 2016, 4:19 AM

I think the don is just hitting on her. (Dirty old man.)

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L.A. Julian
30th Oct 2016, 9:08 PM

No, I think he's genuinely interested -- after all, he doesn't just collect them, he's researched their background, too -- but it doesn't hurt that the resident scholar is an attractive young woman with a personal debt to his family!

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MistakeNPotatoes
30th Oct 2016, 9:45 PM

I make a habit of not commenting on speculation, but I am eternally grateful for it :)

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MistakeNPotatoes
30th Oct 2016, 9:44 PM

Pffhaha!

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