Pt. 1 Ch. 1 - Page 06
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dpat57
19th Sep 2014, 2:00 PM

Who indeed? I always thought there was something fishy about those Innsmouth people... maybe it's the webbed fingers.
A casual arty thought, I dunno if those lines do what you think they do.

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MistakeNPotatoes
19th Sep 2014, 7:32 PM

Indeed - they have the look, you know.

And yeah? The intent was for it to be a DRAMATIC. CUT. Only to have it juxtaposed with said 'strange driver' complaining about the heat.

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Starchasm
20th Sep 2014, 8:01 PM

I thought the lines gave a feeling of forward motion. I think it did what you meant for it to!

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Taily
3rd Oct 2014, 4:03 PM

Oh my god I don't know why that last panel is so amusing to me.
Like, everything is so dramatic with the FWOOOOM and the action lines and then just


it's hot.

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