Pt. 1 Ch. 6 - Page 16

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MistakeNPotatoes
15th Jul 2016, 10:30 AM

Heyyy! Time to learn a bit about Clara :D

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ProfEtheric
15th Jul 2016, 10:58 AM

This backstory makes me love Clara even more!

And why can't I shake the feeling that her father is no longer around, as in "dead"?

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MistakeNPotatoes
17th Jul 2016, 9:57 AM

Good, I'm glad. And gee, you could be right... we'll find out at some point, I'm sure :D

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Taily
15th Jul 2016, 11:40 AM

Clara's a pretty cool lady!! A pretty cool, sad lady ):

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MistakeNPotatoes
17th Jul 2016, 9:58 AM

There aren't a lot of happy people in this story, are there? I guess Jaunt's pretty happy by default. Paulie seems to be doing pretty good, too.

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Taily
17th Jul 2016, 11:13 AM

Jaunt is so happy that he makes up for everyone else's glumness!

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MistakeNPotatoes
17th Jul 2016, 8:30 PM

He does kinda stand out a lot because of it :')

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sigpig
15th Jul 2016, 12:52 PM

Clara looks amazing in that first panel.

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MistakeNPotatoes
17th Jul 2016, 9:59 AM

I'm glad you like it - I actually got really tired of looking at this page, I had a lot of trouble with it, so I have trouble appreciating my own efforts, heh. Thank you Sig!

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MadJak91
15th Jul 2016, 3:20 PM

Heh. Once parents set their minds on something, like what they kid HAS to be instead of supporting what the kids likes, it goes to crap no matter what. Clara tried though. Definitely not her fault that she was even born. She still seems to respect her dad :/

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MistakeNPotatoes
17th Jul 2016, 10:07 AM

When it comes to wealthy families that want to protect their estate, they usually have higher expectations of their kids, too.

Fortunately in Clara's case, her did didn't make her do these things, it was her own decision, so she was much happier for it than is usually the case :)

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Whoa Taters!

SilentCity
15th Jul 2016, 5:42 PM

You just made me tear up for Clara! Nice page. She has developed nicely since Chapter I.

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MistakeNPotatoes
17th Jul 2016, 10:08 AM

Aw shoot, sorry! Or not, if it was a good tearing up, heheh. Thank you!

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azureXtwilight
15th Jul 2016, 6:51 PM

Aw man, I really feel for her :'( She turned out to be great, though!

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MistakeNPotatoes
17th Jul 2016, 10:11 AM

:( Yeah! She's tough and pretty skilled, so it turned out okay in the end :)

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Travis
16th Jul 2016, 10:17 AM

Nice exposition!
you know, you never see the boy trying to be the daughter his mother always wanted..

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MistakeNPotatoes
17th Jul 2016, 10:13 AM

I always dread exposition, thanks man :')

And that's true! I have actually seen it a couple times but only in stories. Meanwhile when I went around asking girls who were only children that I know almost all of them confirmed feeling this kind of pressure growing up. And that's in MODERN TIMES.

We need to get over that craziness, man.

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Bob Mozark
17th Jul 2016, 9:57 AM

That last panel lets us look into the depths of Clara's very being. Well done!

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MistakeNPotatoes
17th Jul 2016, 10:13 AM

I'm glad you see that :) She hasn't had a lot of opportunities to let her guard down in the story so far, so I thought it might stand out.

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Memoria Caelestie
17th Jul 2016, 1:31 PM

ClAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAra your breaking my heart already cus in situations like that no one is a winner!

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MistakeNPotatoes
17th Jul 2016, 8:29 PM

It's true :( She's doing okay now, though!

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Memoria Caelestie
17th Jul 2016, 8:48 PM

that is good to hear! I am starting to really like her!

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HeSerpenty
23rd Jul 2016, 12:04 PM

Aw this makes a lot of sense-- poor Clara! It's not fun feeling like a disappointment to your family (I can relate to that feeling!)

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MistakeNPotatoes
24th Jul 2016, 7:59 PM

Unfortunately a lot of femmes I talked to about this part of the script related :( It's really sad to hear that...

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