Pt. 1 Ch. 6 - Page 4
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Mada
3rd Jun 2016, 10:53 AM

"You mean to tell me...that this Byakhee...has been flying around...wearing drapes?!"

(I'm sorry, but that's where my mind is going.)

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Cursor90
3rd Jun 2016, 7:23 PM

That was in "the sound of music". wasn't it? Does jack make his own clothing. I guess he would have to so for his wings to fit,

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ChwalebnyChlor
3rd Jun 2016, 11:52 AM

You've put so much effort into these pages - they look very good.

Nice sewing machine Jack :3

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MistakeNPotatoes
3rd Jun 2016, 1:01 PM

Oh man, thanks :D

These ones were pretty involved, I'm glad it was noticed, hehe! I was feeling a little burned out (and continue to) after these pages so I'm worried about an upcoming quality dip :/

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ChwalebnyChlor
3rd Jun 2016, 1:56 PM

Don't worry. Your comic has a high art quality, interesing story and characters. And Lovecraft, duh.
I'll stick around until you finish it ;)

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MistakeNPotatoes
3rd Jun 2016, 5:20 PM

Shucks, thanks Chlory :)

I know a lot of this stuff is just anxiety and doubt, etc. I really appreciate it!

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Ahakarin
3rd Jun 2016, 6:29 PM

I know it's a bed sheet, Spartan loft, and sewing machine, but nonetheless Jack really has a nice evil overlord in dramatic cape vibe going here.

Change up the setting, keep all the same poses, and add in some dramatic music and he could be ordering his minions to prepare the doomsday matrix.

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MistakeNPotatoes
3rd Jun 2016, 7:26 PM

He's definitely the lord of his own domain, heheheh.

Something about a tossed blanket adds authority to someone, evil mastermind or no.

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MadJak91
4th Jun 2016, 6:25 AM

Pff. He is going for that superhero look ;)
Swooping on enemies wearing a blanket only... OK.

Anyway. How did he get his wings under that? :O

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MistakeNPotatoes
4th Jun 2016, 3:07 PM

Haha, oh god no XD Jack is no superhero.

Errrr, don't ask questions! He finds out how to do it!

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