Pt. 1 Ch. 6 - Page 3

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MistakeNPotatoes
1st Jun 2016, 10:30 AM

Welp, screw sleeping! Time to see how the scars are doing...

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Babble_ON
1st Jun 2016, 10:35 AM

189 pages and a 189 subs!

The celestial bodies have aligned.

A sacrifice must be made...

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MistakeNPotatoes
1st Jun 2016, 10:43 AM

Yes, indeed... or perhaps a subscribifice or two... ;D

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ProfEtheric
1st Jun 2016, 11:20 AM

Man... It's easy to forget how messed up Jack got.

I gotta say, loving the atmosphere on these pages.

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MistakeNPotatoes
1st Jun 2016, 12:51 PM

He took a few shots.. to be fair he kinda asked for it!

Thank you, though, I appreciate it :) Trying to find out how to improve every chapter.

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thing 1
1st Jun 2016, 11:41 AM

I'm sorry to say, I missed when Jack got messed up but, yeah... glowing green holes that won't close... that ain't good.
or... maybe that's perfectly normal, I don't know! :-/

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MistakeNPotatoes
1st Jun 2016, 12:52 PM

T'was back in the fight in chapter 3. The wounds are from the night before, but the glowy-ness is definitely not normal...

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keltyzoid!
1st Jun 2016, 11:50 AM

-swoon-

damn Jack

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MistakeNPotatoes
1st Jun 2016, 1:11 PM

Hah :D

All that flying, climbing and running, good cardio.

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Taily
1st Jun 2016, 7:35 PM

I have nothing clever to say this time, this is just a great-lookin' page!

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MistakeNPotatoes
1st Jun 2016, 7:57 PM

I consider that a victory on it's own! :D Thanks Taily!

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A little Worse for Wear!

Tigershark06
1st Jun 2016, 8:08 PM

Yup... what the title says....

Precarious position it puts him in though. What price will be paid for his saved life eh?

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MistakeNPotatoes
1st Jun 2016, 8:13 PM

A good question :D I have a lot of stuff up in the air, don't I? Haha!

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Mada
1st Jun 2016, 9:57 PM

See; that's me in the morning. Any sunlight gets in and I'm grabbing the nearest sheet/blanket and wrapping up in it to keep the evil glow out.

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MistakeNPotatoes
1st Jun 2016, 10:16 PM

Jack's a common-man's man :')

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Call Me Tom
2nd Jun 2016, 9:01 AM

I was going to make a fist of the north star joke here, but I dout anyone else rembers that anime...

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MistakeNPotatoes
2nd Jun 2016, 9:07 AM

Haha! Oh god you're right :'D

Maybe Jack gets the ability to death punch...

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MadJak91
2nd Jun 2016, 9:11 AM

The look on Jack's face says more than just being wounded. More like being wounded mentally.
I think poor Jack is REALLY worried he failed and wants to redeem himself.
More so when his boss himself saved him.

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MistakeNPotatoes
2nd Jun 2016, 12:54 PM

There's a lot of complexity in that little alien brain.
It's hard to say what he's actually invested in, other than feeling like he belongs.

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Bob Mozark
2nd Jun 2016, 9:51 AM

It is not easy to make a reptilian creature emote, but you certainly captured a lot of different emotions in that last panel. Kudos to you, sir!

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MistakeNPotatoes
2nd Jun 2016, 12:55 PM

Thanks, I've had a lot of practice with them :)

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Ahakarin
2nd Jun 2016, 11:03 PM

... Hm. Gunshot wounds you can read by.

(...Okay, they can't be -that- bright I'd imagine, but the thought still amuses me.)

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MistakeNPotatoes
2nd Jun 2016, 11:09 PM

Haha XD Jack using his mysterious, eldritch-majick-sealed gunshot wounds to read at night. I like it!

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junoro
15th Apr 2017, 1:32 AM

Jack in the third panel is me every day with every blanket in my house

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MistakeNPotatoes
15th Apr 2017, 10:09 AM

You too are a wearer of the comfiest cape? :D

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junoro
15th Apr 2017, 11:33 AM

It's the COMFIEST cape

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