Pt. 1 Ch. 6 - Page 1

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MistakeNPotatoes
25th May 2016, 10:30 AM

Here we are... new chapter, new things tried artistically. These next few pages have no dialogue or narration, let me know if anything's unclear :') It'd help me out a lot.

In terms of the Q&A pages I'll get them moved later today when I get home from work, probably, and re-link them when I put them back up.

I hope you guys like this chapter. I feel like I've said it before but I really mean it when I say I feel like this is where the plot really gets moving.

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Call Me Tom
25th May 2016, 11:13 AM

Is that a pet bat that jack has?

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MistakeNPotatoes
25th May 2016, 11:29 AM

Hee, I wondered how noticeable that would be. The bat's not necessarily a pet, it comes and goes :D

It is a cameo, though...

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sigpig
25th May 2016, 3:01 PM

Is it Batty?

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T_Deines
25th May 2016, 11:23 AM

I can see these subtle, yet effective changes.

Also, really, incredible angle drawn of Jack, holy crap

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MistakeNPotatoes
25th May 2016, 11:27 AM

:'D

I've been struggling achieving a desired effect from our session last week but I'll have to chat at you about that at some point. What I was able to do for current pages is apply textures... I'm tryin' it out.

But hey, thanks, I'm not a fan of it but I'm glad you like it :')

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joeyballast
25th May 2016, 11:28 AM

Nice environment! I've got a real 'homey living space' vibe going on.

Though I'm a little apprehensive to ask what he needs both a machete and cleaver for on a regular basis...

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MistakeNPotatoes
25th May 2016, 11:30 AM

That's Jack, makin' a nest out of a dusty old attic :) Thanks man!

Eeeehhhh as to those, I mean.. you know, he prepares his own food!

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ProfEtheric
25th May 2016, 11:31 AM

Aw, dang...

That room, man. Your composition is 1000% on point...

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MistakeNPotatoes
25th May 2016, 12:07 PM

Thanks Prof :D

This one definitely took some time n' effort, haha.

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MadJak91
25th May 2016, 1:51 PM

1000% on point is still a point.
I think artists should use 1000% on line or area or whatever.
lmao

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MistakeNPotatoes
25th May 2016, 2:17 PM

But hey, if that point is where you wanna be, that's a hell of a point bro :D

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MadJak91
25th May 2016, 4:34 PM

Point, drawn dot!
Mathematically still a point!

...or something.
I would change the expression to a line or area when it comes to art :D

lmao, thinking too much :D :D

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MistakeNPotatoes
25th May 2016, 2:18 PM

Also it would be weird to say I was 1000% on ray.

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Taily
25th May 2016, 11:39 AM

HELLA good textures in this one!!
And cute cloth patterns on the floor, haha!
And--
wait

image

OH MY GOD

I love you so so so much jfc :')

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MistakeNPotatoes
25th May 2016, 12:08 PM

I hope I can keep using them right and not make them distracting like they were in the past, heh.

Also, Re: Roscoe:

;D Glad you like it, hee hee!

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keltyzoid!
25th May 2016, 12:53 PM

BATTY <3

PTERODACTYL HUSBAND <3

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MistakeNPotatoes
25th May 2016, 2:18 PM

Uwee hee hee :D

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MadJak91
25th May 2016, 1:46 PM

Quite a nice home. No really. I think it fits Jack, haha :D
I do not have many things myself.

First panel. Red machine on the right. I KNOW I have seen it in RL as a part of some vintage decoration but... what is that again?

OMG! That thing you prepare your coffee in. My grandma has the exact same looking one probably after her parents ages back :D

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MistakeNPotatoes
25th May 2016, 2:20 PM

It's a bit uh... utilitarian?

Heheh, it's actually, and I really screwed up drawing this thing and totally regret and wish it was easier to fix at this stage but it's a sewing machine. It uh, is a little anachronistic in this particular fashion, but they were around.

And yes, that's a percolator XD I wanted to have a random assortment of things that Jack doesn't necessarily know how to use, in some cases, but he collects them. He collects things :')

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sigpig
25th May 2016, 3:05 PM

Is that sewing machine a result of the Q&A? lol

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MistakeNPotatoes
25th May 2016, 3:09 PM

Actually no! I had this page made well before the Q&A was even announced so I was tickled that the tailoring question was asked :)

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Cursor90
25th May 2016, 7:14 PM

the bat and the accordion reference the one off page by if forget who. where jaunt is jealous of jack flying around and playing music.

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MistakeNPotatoes
26th May 2016, 10:07 AM

Ding ding ding! The bat is Roscoe from a guest comic by Taily :D You got it

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SilentCity
25th May 2016, 10:18 PM

The concertina! The bat! The hat rack! This is exactly where Jack should live.

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MistakeNPotatoes
26th May 2016, 10:07 AM

It's as Jack as a place can get :D

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Miaubol
26th May 2016, 5:39 AM

Hello stranger :D

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MistakeNPotatoes
26th May 2016, 10:07 AM

He took a Jaunt-sized break from the comic, didn't he? Haha :D

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