Pt. 1 Ch. 5 - Page 34

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MistakeNPotatoes
11th May 2016, 10:30 AM

And then we come to a close... five chapters. Holy cow, I've been doing this for so long. Still setting things up, too. Thanks for sticking with me, guys :')

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joeyballast
11th May 2016, 10:44 AM

Ah... Strange spooky alien stuff and terrifying happenstances. Uniting all of humanity since always.

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MistakeNPotatoes
11th May 2016, 11:14 AM

You know, threats to the human race? That kinda thing?

That's what Chase is banking on, though uh... he left a lot of info out of his story, so he didn't sound like a madman, heheh...

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Twilight
11th May 2016, 11:58 AM

Some things can't be told, they have to be experienced.

Bad luck to those in this story, because it means they're probably going to have an experience. XD

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MistakeNPotatoes
11th May 2016, 12:28 PM

No way :D

Hahaha!

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ChwalebnyChlor
11th May 2016, 10:45 AM

I like everything in the second panel. So good.

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MistakeNPotatoes
11th May 2016, 10:52 AM

That one did turn out pretty well. Last panel... not so much :'D I tried to redraw it a few times and eventually went "you know what screw it" lol

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keltyzoid!
11th May 2016, 10:46 AM

is that Paul from Continue

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MistakeNPotatoes
11th May 2016, 10:51 AM

It is :'D

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ProfEtheric
11th May 2016, 10:55 AM

I seriously hope you dropped the mic. You need to have dropped the mic. You know, "MNP out".

The ride through this entire chapter has been worthy of a mic-drop.

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MistakeNPotatoes
11th May 2016, 11:15 AM

Wait where would I drop the mic? XD

I would never drop the mic at my readers! I have way too much respect.

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Taily
11th May 2016, 8:09 PM

YAYYY new chapter time!! Which means Q&A time!! Huzzah!
Time for a brief Chase comparison from this past year or so:

Then:
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Now:
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Jared Eyebrows Syndrome strikes again.

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MistakeNPotatoes
11th May 2016, 8:53 PM

Oh my god XD

So much progress, yet... so little? I still suck at drawing people. Looks like the only thing that survived was his hair, aside from that I still have his mucked up facial structure which still seems to occasionally change.

Maybe I should make comics where people die every few pages so that I don't have to draw them again. :p

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gideonland
12th May 2016, 4:10 AM

Get the "boys" together to fight a town full of monsters? Sounds super-interesting and new.
Great dialogue and interaction between these two in these last couple of pages.

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MistakeNPotatoes
12th May 2016, 11:37 AM

Mmm, maybe not so straightforward, but I'm throwin' a lot of daggers into the air :'D

Thank you, I was trying to make the threat present and the reasoning believable, I don't wanna go full cartoon here...

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thing 1
12th May 2016, 10:30 PM

oh... now we're back to the boring humans.

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MistakeNPotatoes
13th May 2016, 12:00 AM

Indeed D: You'll have to stay tuned for next chapter, though!

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MadJak91
13th May 2016, 7:13 AM

Is Chase going to recruit gangsters to fight Jaunt? Wow!
Sounds pretty rad :D

Was it about that time that vehicles started using numbered plates and needed to be registered?
Hm.

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MistakeNPotatoes
13th May 2016, 10:04 AM

Maybe! Or maybe he's just looking for a way home? Either way making peace with the people who'd rather see you disappear can't be a bad thing, right?

Also, yes! Mostly big cities like Boston in Massachusetts were using license and registration at this point, but it was a state-wide law. It just uh, took everyone a while to start following suit.

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Memoria Caelestie
30th May 2016, 3:04 PM

WOOF that is really cool and for this chapter! I like itttttttttt!

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MistakeNPotatoes
31st May 2016, 10:53 AM

Yay, thank you :') I thought it was a good note to go on.

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Travis
2nd Jun 2016, 8:18 PM

I just started reading this comic Today, and this is how far I've gotten. Great stuff! The writing is excellent! I don't even know who to root for. And all the world building too. kudos

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MistakeNPotatoes
2nd Jun 2016, 8:22 PM

Oh my goodness, thank you Travis!

I didn't think this comic would be your cup of tea :D I'm glad you like it!

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