Pt. 1 Ch. 5 - Page 14
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MistakeNPotatoes
26th Feb 2016, 11:30 AM

Some quick thinkin' and we're back to a reset - I think Jaunt used his Burst to escape that one.

Anyone?

Haha, carry on! :'D

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MadJak91
26th Feb 2016, 11:42 AM

Good because another punch in the same area would be too much, I guess...

There goes the monocle.
This guy is better fought with senses anyway, I would say. Sensing his movements and strikes.

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MistakeNPotatoes
26th Feb 2016, 2:07 PM

It probably wouldn't be great for J-man, no :')

As far as the monocle goes - could be! I don't wanna give away anything :D

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ProfEtheric
26th Feb 2016, 1:51 PM

I'm really not sure how Jaunt is going to pull this one off...

And that hit LOOKED like it hurt. Good job on that one...

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MistakeNPotatoes
26th Feb 2016, 2:04 PM

This one was a miss, actually! Unless you meant the last hit, which, yes, was pretty brutal :')

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ProfEtheric
26th Feb 2016, 2:17 PM

I'm talking about the first one. And I STILL don't know how Jaunt is going to take a freaking bug monk down...

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ProfEtheric
26th Feb 2016, 3:23 PM

Even if I offer up sacrifices to the Haunter in the Dark and have the Shining Trapezohedron? :P

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thing 1
26th Feb 2016, 2:06 PM

I have an idea, but I don't want to spoil it for everybody.

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Spelledeg
26th Feb 2016, 2:52 PM

I'm insufferably happy that Jaunt isn't grinning about this.

Jaunt just needs to rip off Grasshopper man's antennae but I really hope he loses.

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MistakeNPotatoes
26th Feb 2016, 3:20 PM

If he loses he dies though :'D

I'm sure taking out the antennae would probably help, but how could he get to them? Hmm hmm hmm...

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Holodrum
26th Feb 2016, 3:43 PM

Gotta say, I love the panel layout from the last couple pages. The timing of the spider sense page, and the jagged 4th panel from this one especially stand out to me.

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MistakeNPotatoes
26th Feb 2016, 4:54 PM

Hey, thanks so much :D I've been trying to figure out how to make this most dynamic, but there was some pacing issues from that last page. Live and learn :D

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Taily
26th Feb 2016, 9:41 PM

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HOW COULD THIS HAPPEN TO MEEEEEEEE

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I MADE MY MISTAAAAAKES

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GOT NOWHERE TO RUUUUUUN

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StellarBlitz
29th Feb 2016, 4:22 PM

Uh oh

He lost the monocle that he probs doesn't need anyway

Now stuff's gonna go down. Maybe.

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MistakeNPotatoes
2nd Mar 2016, 2:15 AM

I feel like my action sequences aren't like, super full of crazy stuff happening all the time, they play out more like chess matches :')

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