Pt. 1 Ch. 5 - Page 13

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MistakeNPotatoes
24th Feb 2016, 11:30 AM

Thoom!

Place your bets, ladies, gents, and all else! :D

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keltyzoid!
24th Feb 2016, 11:32 AM

JAUNT NO

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MistakeNPotatoes
24th Feb 2016, 1:29 PM

He goofed

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joeyballast
24th Feb 2016, 11:48 AM

Oh. Oh dear.

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MistakeNPotatoes
24th Feb 2016, 1:29 PM

Indeed :'D

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MadJak91
24th Feb 2016, 11:59 AM

Yes. A very swift counter attack.
Pride hit during the very first move...

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MistakeNPotatoes
24th Feb 2016, 1:29 PM

Yepper :')

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Call Me Tom
24th Feb 2016, 12:12 PM

I'm betting on Jaunt.

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MistakeNPotatoes
24th Feb 2016, 1:30 PM

There's no way he's down and out with one hit, right? :D

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Holodrum
24th Feb 2016, 12:31 PM

Spider Sense! Of course. It's always the last thing you guess.

This should be fun for a shambler who prefers to catch his opponents off guard.

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MistakeNPotatoes
24th Feb 2016, 1:40 PM

Oh yes - ambush predator meets it's match, then it has to think >:D

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Memoria Caelestie
24th Feb 2016, 1:36 PM

well jaunt I would think you are smarter than that!

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MistakeNPotatoes
24th Feb 2016, 1:43 PM

This is supposed to be a very short period of time, I don't feel like I conveyed that very well, though. Either way, he's just sorta testing the waters, seeing what kind of foe he's dealing with... at a cost :')

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Memoria Caelestie
24th Feb 2016, 1:47 PM

I think you made too many panels! I would have only used the the first panel and the last two. With some modifications! I suppose if he doesn't mind being punched in the guts than it's all fine!

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MistakeNPotatoes
24th Feb 2016, 1:59 PM

Oh totally. It's a hindsight is 20/20 sorta thing - I'm FORTUNATE in that I already had other pages made when I created this one so I didn't have time to go back and fix it. That means that I'm catching up on my buffer, though :'D Lesson learned, in terms of pacing.

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Memoria Caelestie
24th Feb 2016, 3:27 PM

yup! well hopefully you can make a buffer again!

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MistakeNPotatoes
24th Feb 2016, 4:34 PM

I used to have a FOUR WEEK BUFFER. FOUR WEEKS :'(

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Memoria Caelestie
24th Feb 2016, 4:53 PM

darn maybe you need a break from posting!

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MistakeNPotatoes
24th Feb 2016, 7:38 PM

Wellll, I took a week off in January!

Really though, I don't want to stop in the middle of this chapter, I might take a break when 6 rolls around in the form of doing a sketched up Q&A session with the different characters. I thought that might be fun, but since this fight had a bit of build up and stopping right in the middle of it would be no good, I'm setting that idea aside for now :)

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Memoria Caelestie
24th Feb 2016, 7:53 PM

well just don't over work yourself! it will make you miserable if you do!

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Memoria Caelestie
24th Feb 2016, 7:54 PM

Just don't over work yourself! it will only serve to make you miserable!

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bobcat303
24th Feb 2016, 1:49 PM

This page is super dynamic!

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MistakeNPotatoes
24th Feb 2016, 1:59 PM

Hey, thank you :)

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azureXtwilight
24th Feb 2016, 7:04 PM

Goddannit Jaunt.

Still betting on him tho.

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MistakeNPotatoes
24th Feb 2016, 7:39 PM

Probably the smart thing to do, haha - unlike doing a fairly basic warp-o strike against someone who says they're built to kill you.

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Bobbiblackcat
24th Feb 2016, 8:10 PM

The coloring is so pretty. :0

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MistakeNPotatoes
25th Feb 2016, 1:49 PM

Aw jeez, thank you :') I try my best!

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Miaubol
25th Feb 2016, 4:37 AM

OW!!!!

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MistakeNPotatoes
25th Feb 2016, 1:49 PM

You're not joking!

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sigpig
25th Feb 2016, 8:57 AM

Sometimes you have to take one for the team (this team being Jaunt). Methinks he's gonna rope-a-dope the big guy while inflicting some crit hits of his own...

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MistakeNPotatoes
25th Feb 2016, 1:50 PM

A solid guess :D

Tomorrow we'll have some insight to just how in-control he is, haha.

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Taily
25th Feb 2016, 10:18 AM

THE PAGE I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR

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Holodrum
25th Feb 2016, 11:18 AM

You've been waiting for Jaunt to get clobbered? Lol. Poor guy can't get a break recently.

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Taily
25th Feb 2016, 12:01 PM

Yep! Jaunt's a smarmy narcissist and I enjoy seeing him in pain! :D

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MistakeNPotatoes
25th Feb 2016, 1:50 PM

I like seeing him taken down a peg, myself, haha!

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Bob Mozark
25th Feb 2016, 11:09 AM

Panels one and two make me wonder if the antennae serve some sort of direction finder purpose. And, if so, how will Jaunt counteract them. Because, I think that his attack was intended to feel out the capabilities of his opponent.

Congratulations on the buffer, by the way. That is like money in the bank!

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MistakeNPotatoes
25th Feb 2016, 1:57 PM

You're pretty spot on - Kurt here has his antennae, as well as psychic capabilities. It's a pretty good response to an ambush predator, so Jaunt's gotta get those cogs turning quick.

It was definitely testing his opponent's capabilities but he paid a much steeper price than he thought he would :')

And yeah! Buffer to me is more important than money in the bank!

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ProfEtheric
25th Feb 2016, 11:41 AM

That has GOT to hurt!

Things are not looking good for the shambler here, but he's crafty, so it's anyone's fight right now.

(Page looks great, btw!)

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MistakeNPotatoes
25th Feb 2016, 2:31 PM

Yeah, getting clotheslined around a solid point on the gut, does not do a body good, haha.

Oh man, I'm so sad I have to upload this so slowly because it's a fight scene. Super slow motion... thanks though, I'm glad you like it!

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Spelledeg
25th Feb 2016, 11:27 PM

I really want Jaunt to lose. Is that bad.

JAUNT YES.

Grasshopper Man for the win yo. I'M SO EXCITED ABOUT THIS FITE.

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MistakeNPotatoes
26th Feb 2016, 4:32 PM

Why you want main character guy to lose XD

I hope you get what you're looking for out of it :')

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bigbadcreepyben
26th Feb 2016, 3:45 PM

YOu now have yourself another continuous reader.

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MistakeNPotatoes
26th Feb 2016, 4:32 PM

Awesome, thank you! :D Where'd you find me from, if you don't mind me asking?

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bigbadcreepyben
29th Feb 2016, 10:21 PM

I'm not sure what site but I'm pretty sure it was a banner ad.

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MistakeNPotatoes
2nd Mar 2016, 2:16 AM

Hm! Maybe TWC then, I'm not running any ads currently. Thank you, either way :D

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zaika
16th Mar 2016, 11:10 AM

Nicely done action sequence here!!

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MistakeNPotatoes
16th Mar 2016, 12:15 PM

Thank youuuu :D

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