Pt. 1 Ch. 5 - Page 13
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MadJak91
24th Feb 2016, 11:59 AM

Yes. A very swift counter attack.
Pride hit during the very first move...

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Holodrum
24th Feb 2016, 12:31 PM

Spider Sense! Of course. It's always the last thing you guess.

This should be fun for a shambler who prefers to catch his opponents off guard.

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MistakeNPotatoes
24th Feb 2016, 1:43 PM

This is supposed to be a very short period of time, I don't feel like I conveyed that very well, though. Either way, he's just sorta testing the waters, seeing what kind of foe he's dealing with... at a cost :')

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Memoria Caelestie
24th Feb 2016, 1:47 PM

I think you made too many panels! I would have only used the the first panel and the last two. With some modifications! I suppose if he doesn't mind being punched in the guts than it's all fine!

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MistakeNPotatoes
24th Feb 2016, 1:59 PM

Oh totally. It's a hindsight is 20/20 sorta thing - I'm FORTUNATE in that I already had other pages made when I created this one so I didn't have time to go back and fix it. That means that I'm catching up on my buffer, though :'D Lesson learned, in terms of pacing.

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MistakeNPotatoes
24th Feb 2016, 7:38 PM

Wellll, I took a week off in January!

Really though, I don't want to stop in the middle of this chapter, I might take a break when 6 rolls around in the form of doing a sketched up Q&A session with the different characters. I thought that might be fun, but since this fight had a bit of build up and stopping right in the middle of it would be no good, I'm setting that idea aside for now :)

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MistakeNPotatoes
24th Feb 2016, 7:39 PM

Probably the smart thing to do, haha - unlike doing a fairly basic warp-o strike against someone who says they're built to kill you.

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sigpig
25th Feb 2016, 8:57 AM

Sometimes you have to take one for the team (this team being Jaunt). Methinks he's gonna rope-a-dope the big guy while inflicting some crit hits of his own...

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Holodrum
25th Feb 2016, 11:18 AM

You've been waiting for Jaunt to get clobbered? Lol. Poor guy can't get a break recently.

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Taily
25th Feb 2016, 12:01 PM

Yep! Jaunt's a smarmy narcissist and I enjoy seeing him in pain! :D

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Bob Mozark
25th Feb 2016, 11:09 AM

Panels one and two make me wonder if the antennae serve some sort of direction finder purpose. And, if so, how will Jaunt counteract them. Because, I think that his attack was intended to feel out the capabilities of his opponent.

Congratulations on the buffer, by the way. That is like money in the bank!

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MistakeNPotatoes
25th Feb 2016, 1:57 PM

You're pretty spot on - Kurt here has his antennae, as well as psychic capabilities. It's a pretty good response to an ambush predator, so Jaunt's gotta get those cogs turning quick.

It was definitely testing his opponent's capabilities but he paid a much steeper price than he thought he would :')

And yeah! Buffer to me is more important than money in the bank!

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ProfEtheric
25th Feb 2016, 11:41 AM

That has GOT to hurt!

Things are not looking good for the shambler here, but he's crafty, so it's anyone's fight right now.

(Page looks great, btw!)

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MistakeNPotatoes
25th Feb 2016, 2:31 PM

Yeah, getting clotheslined around a solid point on the gut, does not do a body good, haha.

Oh man, I'm so sad I have to upload this so slowly because it's a fight scene. Super slow motion... thanks though, I'm glad you like it!

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Spelledeg
25th Feb 2016, 11:27 PM

I really want Jaunt to lose. Is that bad.

JAUNT YES.

Grasshopper Man for the win yo. I'M SO EXCITED ABOUT THIS FITE.

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MistakeNPotatoes
26th Feb 2016, 4:32 PM

Why you want main character guy to lose XD

I hope you get what you're looking for out of it :')

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