Pt. 1 Ch. 5 - Page 7

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MistakeNPotatoes
3rd Feb 2016, 11:30 AM

I feel we're pretty caught up on Chase and Clara. How're things doing in Jaunt's corner of the universe? Still about to fight? Cool.

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MadJak91
3rd Feb 2016, 11:47 AM

Meh for Chase as the guy just needs to pull the trigger but hopefully good for Jaunt.
I hope bug brain gets what is coming to him :D

At least monsters have a certain feel for dueling. But humans can strike deals! :D

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MistakeNPotatoes
3rd Feb 2016, 1:57 PM

Especially with the mob, there's all kinds of deals and such being struck and run behind the scenes. Chase's gamble hasn't failed yet, but it doesn't look great :')

Meanwhile, we'll have to see if this Krrr'tchk individual can put their money where their mandibles are.

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Memoria Caelestie
3rd Feb 2016, 11:51 AM

Oh chase you did a good one, You would not think a criminal would put you down? well you are the most intelligent man alive I must say! Maybe listen to Clara next time!

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MistakeNPotatoes
3rd Feb 2016, 2:02 PM

He does know these guys, or at least that's what I'm implying :'D Mobsters are complicated, he might not done for...

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Memoria Caelestie
3rd Feb 2016, 2:22 PM

well they are still mobster I would not go to them even if I were related to them! A lot of death is involved!

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MistakeNPotatoes
3rd Feb 2016, 2:38 PM

For sure! We'll see how it pays off...

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Memoria Caelestie
3rd Feb 2016, 2:47 PM

I would not want chase's mug dead, he is such gentlemen!

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MistakeNPotatoes
3rd Feb 2016, 2:53 PM

I'm surprised to see you say that, unless you are being SUPER sarcastic :')

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Memoria Caelestie
3rd Feb 2016, 3:02 PM

I do find chase interesting as a main character I would not want to see him die actually! I am also super sarcastic on the previous comment but I do mean that I do want him to survive, to see how he develops as a character! To see how what other sexist comment he is going to make! He is dislikeable but not hate able!

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MistakeNPotatoes
3rd Feb 2016, 3:18 PM

I'm super glad to hear that :)

A lot of people have written Chase off already, I'm glad to know some people want to see him develop. Give him a chance, he may surprise you with his depth if he gets the chance :)

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Memoria Caelestie
3rd Feb 2016, 3:50 PM

hehehehe He is one of my favorite character in your comic, after hugh tho! Well he kept me interested the whole comic and also surprising me at time so that is going to be fun to read in the future!

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ProfEtheric
3rd Feb 2016, 12:00 PM

Really?!?!? THIS is where we're leaving the humans? Man.....

That's okay. Coming back to Jaunt cliffhanger...

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MistakeNPotatoes
3rd Feb 2016, 2:03 PM

Pffhaha! Don't worry, I'll be back to them, just tryin' to pace it out a little ;)

Yeah, let's see these other two for a while. (Jack and Hugh are sleeping around now so we won't see them for a bit.)

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Taily
3rd Feb 2016, 8:47 PM

jack and hugh are sleeping around now

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MistakeNPotatoes
4th Feb 2016, 12:32 AM

HUGH AND JACK ARE SLEEPING, AROUND THIS TIME.

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ProfEtheric
4th Feb 2016, 4:12 AM

Are we slut-shaming the poor monsters? :P

I mean, I can see such behavior from Jack, but Hugh comes as a shock... XD

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MistakeNPotatoes
5th Feb 2016, 1:43 PM

Noo, but one of them almost lost their best friend and the other one got shot, like, a lot of times. They're resting! D:

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ChilPhil
3rd Feb 2016, 12:25 PM

Man, everyone is in trouble.

I like how insect man's chest plate looks in that 5th panel.

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MistakeNPotatoes
3rd Feb 2016, 2:04 PM

Lots of bad stuff abounds - and thank you! I thought it was a cool addition to their outfit :)

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Taily
3rd Feb 2016, 8:47 PM

just look at these two men in panels 2 and 3 and try to tell me they don't have the hots for each other

lovely lighting in panel 4, i gotta admit though i was kind of jarred by the abrupt transition to bug dude because the blue line didn't register in my mind as a change of scene!

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MistakeNPotatoes
4th Feb 2016, 12:32 AM

STOP TRYING TO MAKE THIS A THING

And yeah, I was worried about that... I'll do better with the transition next time. Thanks for the input :D

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Holodrum
4th Feb 2016, 5:30 PM

Tailys thing should never stop!
He'll personally make sure everyone involved is related one of these days.

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MistakeNPotatoes
5th Feb 2016, 1:43 PM

Why I oughtta...

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keltyzoid!
5th Feb 2016, 2:34 PM

that bug guy is hot, look at those fuck-me hips

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MistakeNPotatoes
5th Feb 2016, 2:47 PM

Oh deary me :')

I actually had a moment where I stepped back and looked at it and I was like "Was that subconscious? I didn't intend that."

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Taily
9th Feb 2016, 11:01 PM

mmmm bug navel

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MistakeNPotatoes
10th Feb 2016, 5:51 PM

TALI NO STOP

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