Pt. 1 Ch. 4 - Page 21

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MistakeNPotatoes
13th Nov 2015, 11:30 AM

That top panel took forever to draw.

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I hope people look at it for longer than a minute :')

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Call Me Tom
13th Nov 2015, 12:05 PM

Awesome!

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MistakeNPotatoes
14th Nov 2015, 12:45 PM

Thanks, they who are known as Tom :D

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Holodrum
13th Nov 2015, 12:09 PM

Oohh... Pretty...

Elsewhere indeed.

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Holodrum
13th Nov 2015, 12:11 PM

eep... If the perspective is to be believed, those winged things in the background must be enormous.

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MistakeNPotatoes
14th Nov 2015, 12:45 PM

May have been a visual miscommunication on my part as they weren't intended to be super big but NOW THEY'RE DRAGONS

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ProfEtheric
13th Nov 2015, 12:21 PM

Wow! It took forever, but it was SOOOOOO worth it, man! Gotta love these places beyond time and space...

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MistakeNPotatoes
14th Nov 2015, 12:46 PM

Thanks, I hope with shots like these people won't be too displeased by my color splash backgrounds for a few pages ;D

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Carnac_the_M
13th Nov 2015, 1:06 PM

My god(s)... I love it!!! I absolutely love it all. I think I see a diner in the first panel, bottom left. Also creature walking down the walkway steps in the foreground but only barely visable; methinks it is a Xenomorph, for it looks just like one to me. Maybe in this realm beyond what we mortal humans/Earthligs perceive is the time-space continuum things are not always what we think or believe they are.

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MistakeNPotatoes
14th Nov 2015, 12:48 PM

I was trying to invoke different types of buildings and some different architectural styles to indicated different species and such, so I'm glad that comes across :)

And actually the thing walking down the steps is sort of what I have in my head for a Mi-Go, though I realize it's a little alternate to the popular form (like most of the things I draw)

And you're close! I'll get into what this place is in the comic but it's not too much of a spoiler, it's sort of a nexus or joining point where portals from other places lead, so a interdimensional/galactic gathering point of sorts.

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Carnac_the_m
15th Nov 2015, 1:15 PM

Ah and no worries then. Since it's so out of focus and not detailed; me, my eyes and mind saw it and fished out 'Xenomorph'. But I guess a Mii-Go is more appropriate though. Great!!! ^__^

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MadJak91
13th Nov 2015, 1:46 PM

Holy damn!
You outdone yourself, son!
I thoroughly inspected it :D
Serious props :)

What are the blue portals?

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MistakeNPotatoes
14th Nov 2015, 12:48 PM

Thank you so much :') I tried

Those are portals to different places in time and space that lead here, joining different species and societies to one big melting pot.

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MadJak91
14th Nov 2015, 1:10 PM

So is Jaunt using a... hm... portable or private version of such portal?

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MistakeNPotatoes
14th Nov 2015, 1:33 PM

As is a feature of his species, he can shift dimensions naturally, he doesn't need any assistance :)

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Xylas_Incarnum
13th Nov 2015, 2:33 PM

BEHOLD! The Eldritch commonwealth... well one of them anyways.

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MistakeNPotatoes
14th Nov 2015, 12:48 PM

You got it! :D

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keltyzoid!
13th Nov 2015, 5:14 PM

i want this page on my wall

and my fridge, but like in my fridge

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MistakeNPotatoes
14th Nov 2015, 12:49 PM

Put it in the crisper? Haha

Man, if I get around to it I can see whether I made this at a printable resolution, I'm not sure I did...

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SilentCity
13th Nov 2015, 6:46 PM

That's some really fine drawing. Love it!

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MistakeNPotatoes
14th Nov 2015, 12:49 PM

Hey thanks :D

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Taily
13th Nov 2015, 7:44 PM

swooce

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MistakeNPotatoes
14th Nov 2015, 12:50 PM

Oh my god I could have put the swooce in there couldn't I.

Damn, I'll have to use it for my original intention I guess :)

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Slim Kittens
13th Nov 2015, 9:59 PM

I looked at the first panel and thought "that must have taken forever to draw".

First panel, upper left hand corner: is that the foot of the monster in "Forbidden Planet"?

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MistakeNPotatoes
14th Nov 2015, 12:50 PM

I'm not familiar with Forbidden Planet, so I'm afraid not! Just a weird building, heheh.

But thank you though, it did take entirely too long to render...

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JasonMiller
13th Nov 2015, 11:34 PM

Man this is great! You can see the effort you put in this whole thing, not just that first panel.
I can't stop staring.

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MistakeNPotatoes
14th Nov 2015, 12:52 PM

Hey, thanks man! I'm tryin' to get better, I really am :')

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Miaubol
14th Nov 2015, 9:32 AM

Wow that first panel.. Truly amazing!
What I see in the background, are they entrances to different worlds/dimensions/universes? Jaunt uses his private one though.. ;)

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MistakeNPotatoes
14th Nov 2015, 12:51 PM

Thank you Miau! :D

And you super got it, that's exactly what's goin' on. And yeah, Jaunt doesn't bother with that plebian stuff, he's got his OWN portal!

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Miaubol
20th Nov 2015, 7:54 AM

"plebian" xD

also, edited typo in original comment..

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Mgnostic
14th Nov 2015, 10:45 AM

Well, this just took an unexpected turn. There is a ton of opportunity for neat stuff in the sky alone. Well done.

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MistakeNPotatoes
14th Nov 2015, 12:53 PM

I LIKE taking unexpected turns! And you're super correct, a whole new world of possibility here, heheh...

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Bob Mozark
14th Nov 2015, 1:37 PM

Wow! Just, wow. My mind has been blown.

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MistakeNPotatoes
15th Nov 2015, 7:29 PM

Hooray :D

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Teslaverian
14th Nov 2015, 10:37 PM

This page is AWESOME! Aaah I've just been admiring it for a bit... seriously great stuff *v*

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MistakeNPotatoes
15th Nov 2015, 7:29 PM

Hey wow, thanks! :D

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Schplork
15th Nov 2015, 3:29 AM

I'm caught up -- bummer.
After the last installment I'm starting to think that Jaunt is a better boss than most of the bosses I ever had.

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MistakeNPotatoes
15th Nov 2015, 7:30 PM

Ah, that feeling of catching up and having nothing more to consume...

I've been there too many times. Don't worry, I'm working on getting more pages out, heheh! And that's neat to hear! I'm sure Jaunt would love to know that :')

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Sleeper
10th Feb 2016, 11:41 PM

That first panel is incredible. Very well done good sir.

Also, that building on the top left looks very familiar but I can't put my finger on exactly why.

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MistakeNPotatoes
28th Feb 2016, 6:30 PM

Oh jeeze this comment got lost somewhere and I didn't notice it - thank you so much! I uh, spent some time on that panel, haha.

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iddqd
28th Feb 2016, 8:57 AM

Oh wow! Now that's what "drawing environments " vs. "drawing backgrounds" is all about!

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MistakeNPotatoes
28th Feb 2016, 6:30 PM

From you, that means a super lot to me :')

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zaika
16th Mar 2016, 10:56 AM

Damn dude...that top panel is *spectacular*. Knocked it out of the park!

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MistakeNPotatoes
16th Mar 2016, 11:48 AM

Thanks it uh.. it took me some time :')

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HeSerpenty
23rd Jun 2016, 12:47 PM

OMG that city-scape! Amazing! *__*

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MistakeNPotatoes
23rd Jun 2016, 1:21 PM

Aw gee, thanks Serp :)

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