Pt. 1 Ch. 4 - Page 1

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MistakeNPotatoes
4th Sep 2015, 10:45 AM

First page of a new chapter - always a little anxious about these. Except for the first page of chapter three, I was happy with that one.

We actually get to see the main characters TALKING TO EACH OTHER now, whatta concept!

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Centcomm
4th Sep 2015, 11:30 AM

Excellent job as always! :D

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MistakeNPotatoes
5th Sep 2015, 5:46 PM

Thank you Centy :)

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ProfEtheric
4th Sep 2015, 12:02 PM

Riiiiiight... nothing to come of it later...

(Excellent work on the page, as usual!)

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MistakeNPotatoes
5th Sep 2015, 5:47 PM

Listening for so many shoes to drop...

Thank you, though :)

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keltyzoid!
4th Sep 2015, 12:16 PM

*swooooon*

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MistakeNPotatoes
5th Sep 2015, 5:47 PM

Gehehe

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ChilPhil
4th Sep 2015, 12:22 PM

Ah, what a nice guy.

Oh, I think it is time to go shopping for some new clothes.

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MistakeNPotatoes
5th Sep 2015, 5:48 PM

Oh he's so considerate, right? Not condescending at all!

Also I wonder where Jack gets his clothes... the Wing and Tailor?

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Blockround
4th Sep 2015, 12:26 PM

dang, jack is jacked

not literally though because jaunt patched him up

ill leave quietly now

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MistakeNPotatoes
5th Sep 2015, 5:50 PM

If you spent all your time running on rooftops and flying around you'd probably be pretty ripped!

Just like the bullets that literally ripped him.

I'll take the same door out...

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#0v0#

Vincent
4th Sep 2015, 2:10 PM

"It's not like I asked you to save me. Bakka!!" - Jack (probably)

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MistakeNPotatoes
5th Sep 2015, 5:51 PM

Ugh I wish sempai DIDN'T notice me...

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Taily
4th Sep 2015, 7:59 PM

you know i take care of my assets ;)

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MistakeNPotatoes
5th Sep 2015, 5:51 PM

Dear god Taily why

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Taily
5th Sep 2015, 6:03 PM

image

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Slim Kittens
4th Sep 2015, 9:07 PM

Always cover your assets.

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MistakeNPotatoes
5th Sep 2015, 5:52 PM

You gotta, also diversify your portfolio.

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Miaubol
5th Sep 2015, 5:08 AM

Jack looks so embarrassed.. xD

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MistakeNPotatoes
5th Sep 2015, 5:54 PM

Mad, embarrassed - he generally is displeased in some way or another, haha.

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crowwinters
9th Sep 2015, 1:04 PM

Jaunt's casual disregard for the laws of reality is very Dr. Who-ish, haha. There's a bit of that mad professor magic in him.

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MistakeNPotatoes
10th Sep 2015, 11:58 AM

Nice, glad to hear it :D Totally the goal.

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MadJak91
10th Sep 2015, 6:51 AM

Yep! That is what I appreciate about Jaunt.
He is a rough and demanding leader but treats his subordinates as pals and equals because in the end, he cannot do anything alone.
More so now when he realized they are humans capable of outsmarting him on EVERY level no matter how powerful...

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MistakeNPotatoes
10th Sep 2015, 11:59 AM

Weeeeeeeeeelll, I wouldn't go THAT far but they certainly surprised the heck out of him. Now he has to DO something about it :)

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Jackarais
29th Jan 2018, 8:15 PM

"You know I take care of my assets..." he says, over the panel of naked Jack.

Excellent.

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