Pt. 1 Ch. 4 - Stopgap

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MistakeNPotatoes
2nd Sep 2015, 10:30 AM

Now we enter the fourth chapter - this is intended to be where the major plot begins, so I hope you all enjoy it even more than the previous ones!

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Taily
2nd Sep 2015, 10:40 AM

Yesssss. Yessssss. So hype.

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MistakeNPotatoes
2nd Sep 2015, 11:30 AM

:D I'm glad!

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keltyzoid!
2nd Sep 2015, 11:08 AM

u no he ded

im gonna send you money

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MistakeNPotatoes
2nd Sep 2015, 11:30 AM

Well... whoever it is they're certainly not feeling the best they've felt, I'm sure, heh.

Thank you Kelts :')

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keltyzoid!
2nd Sep 2015, 11:15 AM

also Tates check the fanart thread

i left you a surprise

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MistakeNPotatoes
2nd Sep 2015, 11:31 AM

I see that now XD You're so mean!

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ProfEtheric
2nd Sep 2015, 11:40 AM

So the real question is... just who is that poor unfortunate soul? And are we in the dream realm here?

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Xylas_Incarnum
2nd Sep 2015, 2:28 PM

I dunno since I haven't been there, but I /REALLY/ don't think that's Kansas... or anywhere on Earth for that matter... or Anywhere else in the mortal plane where humans could easily get to when said human carries a firearm for that matter.

Save maybe Harry Dresden but I doubt he's part of this.

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Blockround
2nd Sep 2015, 2:12 PM

atmospheric AS FUCK

I await more with baited breath

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MistakeNPotatoes
4th Sep 2015, 9:28 AM

Eeexcellent :D

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Xylas_Incarnum
2nd Sep 2015, 2:25 PM

poor man... he should have brought a SMG, second pistol, a knife or two, and some spare mags for the firearms in easy reach.

OR possibly just better aim.

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MistakeNPotatoes
4th Sep 2015, 9:29 AM

I mean, if whatever they came face to face with could even be affected by those things...

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Xylas_Incarnum
4th Sep 2015, 6:07 PM

lots of metal flying fast at you tends to make the ones on the receiving end dodge or something usually.

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Atsuuikakura
2nd Sep 2015, 2:37 PM

thats a pretty badass cover page

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MistakeNPotatoes
4th Sep 2015, 9:29 AM

Hey thanks!

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Holodrum
4th Sep 2015, 10:45 AM

Gotta say man. Everything about that page just looks amazing. The harsh uninviting landscape, and how the bloody hand just says "Whelp, I tried. Can't shoot everything."

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MistakeNPotatoes
5th Sep 2015, 5:55 PM

Aw gee, thanks Holo :)

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MadJak91
11th Sep 2015, 2:51 PM

OK, I was tired the last time I checked but I need to get back to the cover.

Not to be a jerk but I for one find the palm odd-looking and somehow off like it is both fat at wrong spots and a bit "bloated."
The fingers are perfect but the palm seems weird.
Mostly the half closer to the gun. The half closer to us seems to be OK.

Maybe some optical angle I do not see properly? (if there is such thing)
What do you think?

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MistakeNPotatoes
11th Sep 2015, 3:01 PM

Oh yeah, it's not a good drawing XD

I tried and tried a few times, but it just wasn't happening. This was right after my trip to Providence and art wasn't working for me so I just did what I could and said "I'll do better next time."

I might actually make a new cover at some point, we'll see.

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MadJak91
11th Sep 2015, 3:15 PM

Yep :D
I get that!

That is why I only say such things occasionally because chances are the artist knows how their work looks like and I feel like I am just rubbing it in their face :D

It is cool!

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Memoria Caelestie
23rd Jan 2016, 1:29 PM

ohhhhhh nooooooooooooo

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Kev
31st Jan 2016, 11:22 AM

I'm REALLY enjoying this comic so far! Such a fresh and humane take on Lovecraft lore. Plus the characters have so much personality. I really like all of them so far, especially Hubert <3.

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MistakeNPotatoes
31st Jan 2016, 11:38 AM

Ha ha ha, oh Hugh :'D

Thank you so much, though, I'm glad you're liking it :)

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