Pt 1. Ch. 3 - Page 29
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MistakeNPotatoes
14th Aug 2015, 10:44 AM

Oh ho... looks like some people got their wish, and some didn't. A trying time for all involved, to be sure...

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Centcomm
14th Aug 2015, 10:55 AM

Yeesssssssss - claps and gives a standing ovation ..

excellent scene Mistake.. nicely done! :D

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MistakeNPotatoes
14th Aug 2015, 8:19 PM

Thank you! I thought it would be to people's satisfaction, regardless of where they stand in allegiance, heheh.

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Epiale
14th Aug 2015, 11:10 AM

Page looks awesome! I admire your dedication to drawing that bike. :,)

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Miaubol
14th Aug 2015, 11:20 AM

Miss!

I really expected that they or the bike would be hit.

A pretty close one though. Next time they may have less ..luck.

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Ninja
14th Aug 2015, 11:52 AM

Now i can't help but feel sad for Al. I, too, hope that he did not doom them all...

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MistakeNPotatoes
14th Aug 2015, 8:21 PM

Unfortunately he's got a bit of a brain, so the ramifications of him missing are laying pretty heavily on his mind right now.

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ChilPhil
14th Aug 2015, 1:01 PM

I forgive you Al.
We're all doomed.
It's been said before, but you do such a great job using a variety of different angles.

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MistakeNPotatoes
14th Aug 2015, 8:21 PM

Indeed we are, heheh.

Thank you, though, I set out to try and learn and apply this stuff for sure!

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Twilight
14th Aug 2015, 7:16 PM

Dude, you just doomed yourself by counting your chickens before they hatched. You're never home free until you're home. Hell, you might not even be home free after getting home.

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rufiangel
14th Aug 2015, 8:45 PM

Love the fishbowl perspective of the buildings in the last panel there, that's awesome :D <3

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Bob Mozark
15th Aug 2015, 8:56 AM

“There is nothing more exhilarating than to be shot at with no result.”

Winston Churchill

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Skweeee
16th Aug 2015, 8:44 AM

Ya know, I think that the motorcycle is probably the worst escape vehicle ever.

Great page!!!

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MistakeNPotatoes
19th Aug 2015, 6:16 PM

Oh yeah? Haha - that sounds like a personal experience comment, now I'm curious!

Thank you, also :D

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Taily
16th Aug 2015, 10:46 AM

I love Al's little moment with Elder Jesus some kind of higher power in panels 4 and 5. ALSO REALLY GOOD FACES IN 2 AND 3 WOW

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MistakeNPotatoes
19th Aug 2015, 6:17 PM

Ah yes, the jesus take the wheel remark, heheheh.

Thank you, I was really happy with how those faces came out :D

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MistakeNPotatoes
19th Aug 2015, 6:17 PM

Hey thanks, Snack! Where's the colonel? As you can see, Jack's already here but he failed his mission...

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Holodrum
18th Aug 2015, 4:43 PM

Yay!! They're out! Now Jaunt can get back to healing Jack! Come-on little buddy... Stay with us!

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Sleeper
19th Aug 2015, 3:41 PM

Dammit!

Filthy humans are escaping! Now is when we need Jack the most...

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