Pt 1. Ch. 3 - Page 28

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MistakeNPotatoes
12th Aug 2015, 10:25 AM

Uploading from the past again - I'm sorry I haven't been replying to comments recently, there's a REASON for that!

I decided on the weekend to go to Necronomicon Providence because I'm leaving my job, which gave me about a week to prepare for advertising and stuff since I wanna spread the word about my comic.

Fortunately I'm just about done, all that I have left is not time sensitive. Anyway, I hope you enjoy this update, I'll be replying to everyone from last upload and today's when I get home, promise!

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rufiangel
12th Aug 2015, 10:29 AM

Amazing page. O_O Love that KRAKOW! Panel. And the way the colours all change up that last panel is whoooa. XD <3

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MistakeNPotatoes
12th Aug 2015, 1:24 PM

Aw jeez, thank you Rufi :D

I was trying for a different effect, tryin' to make it a little more dramatic.

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keltyzoid!
12th Aug 2015, 10:33 AM

if that bullet doesnt hit Chase im unsubscribing

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MistakeNPotatoes
12th Aug 2015, 1:26 PM

*sweating intensifies*

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MadJak91
12th Aug 2015, 10:51 AM

I love when authors do the slow motion shots for one reason.
The outcome was already decided a few seconds earlier (realistically speaking) and you just watch how it went with added suspense :D
This is where fiction has the edge.

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MistakeNPotatoes
12th Aug 2015, 1:26 PM

Oh yes, I'm dragging this one out... last chance to stop 'em, this is the moment...

mweeheehee!

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Sleeper
12th Aug 2015, 10:53 AM

Great job ramping up the action here! Love all the exciting angles

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MistakeNPotatoes
12th Aug 2015, 1:27 PM

Thanks, man! :D

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Blockround
12th Aug 2015, 10:56 AM

a cliffhanger within a cliffhanger.

seriously great work here man, the perspective is spot on and that is not easy to do.

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MistakeNPotatoes
12th Aug 2015, 1:28 PM

That's the thing about these long form comics in webcomic update schedules, we get infinite cliffhangers which, I fear, is too trying if it goes on for too long, haha!

I'm glad you like it :'D These pages were particularly tough, I remember.

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Seabiscuit
12th Aug 2015, 11:02 AM

Ohhh gosh that last panel beautiful!:'D

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MistakeNPotatoes
12th Aug 2015, 1:28 PM

Thanks, Sea! :D

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ProfEtheric
12th Aug 2015, 11:06 AM

Oh, whoa!

Talk about ramping up the intensity!

*holds on tight*

Edit: if that bullet hits Clara, I'm unsubscribing. :P

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MistakeNPotatoes
12th Aug 2015, 1:28 PM

Yes, FEEL IT

Also

*SWEATING INTENSIFIES*

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Twilight
13th Aug 2015, 7:19 AM

Nah, it'll hit Jack, because he's a bullet magnet!

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Ninja
12th Aug 2015, 11:52 AM

Oh MistakenPotatoes, you majestic son of a deep one...

I want it to hit and i DON'T WANT IT TO HIT.

someone tell me how to feel about this mess.

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MistakeNPotatoes
12th Aug 2015, 1:29 PM

Only Yog-Sothoth could know.

I appreciate it, man :D

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Xylas_Incarnum
13th Aug 2015, 5:00 AM

Want it to hit the bike, not the people on it?

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Centcomm
12th Aug 2015, 11:58 AM

awesome perspective shot.. MISS MISS MISS!! :D

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MistakeNPotatoes
12th Aug 2015, 1:29 PM

Friday... friday we will all know...

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Miaubol
12th Aug 2015, 12:49 PM

...

missmissmissmissmissmissmissmiss

or, maybe he aimed at the bike, not at the humans, to stop them but not kill them ..yet.

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MistakeNPotatoes
12th Aug 2015, 1:30 PM

>:D

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Guest
12th Aug 2015, 2:12 PM

If this hits the gas tank... D:

THIS PAGE IS SO GOOD. I love the colors in the last one, and the action is powerful. I can feel the camera whipping around aaahhhhh

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crowwinters
12th Aug 2015, 2:13 PM

that was me. whoops.

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iddqd
12th Aug 2015, 2:29 PM

Dat rifling

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MistakeNPotatoes
14th Aug 2015, 8:26 PM

Haha, I need to do that a little better next time, I just wanted to add some interest to the drawing.

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Epiale
12th Aug 2015, 2:36 PM

That last panel looks amazing. The entire page looks amazing. Got a great feel of motion and speed to it. :D

Also I kinda like them, but I do not see this ending well for them, haha.

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MistakeNPotatoes
14th Aug 2015, 8:27 PM

Thanks! The last panel was my attempt at making a high-tension bullet-time kinda effect.

And while we know the outcome now, I'm glad to evoke that guess :D

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Suspenseful!

Twilight
12th Aug 2015, 6:02 PM

And now a moment from our sponsors! XD

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MistakeNPotatoes
14th Aug 2015, 8:28 PM

This would totally cut to commercial, here, wouldn't it? Hah.

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Xylas_Incarnum
12th Aug 2015, 6:22 PM

MMmm... Enter the Matrix next page?

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MistakeNPotatoes
14th Aug 2015, 8:28 PM

Basically, bwaha

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jolle
13th Aug 2015, 7:31 AM

I consider my self a sort of a gun nut, (even though I don't own any guns) so that gun in the first panel looks more like shotgun rather than a rifle. And the stock of the gun disappeared somewhere in panel four.

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MistakeNPotatoes
14th Aug 2015, 8:29 PM

Yeah, I was off with a lot of things on this weapon but I think it serves it's purpose as a plot device.

I realized I'd forgotten the stock on that page but realized it beyond the point of fixing it, so I let it be. Better finished than perfect, I think, but it doesn't stop me from trying! :)

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Bob Mozark
13th Aug 2015, 9:41 AM

The rifle in looks like a carbine version of the Mannlicher-Schoenauer, sold as the finest rifle in the world, until it became to expensive to produce.

http://www.chuckhawks.com/m-s_carbine.htm


I took like the shift in coloring in the last panel. It makes it seem like they are feeling hopeful of a successful escape from the town. Will those hopes be dashed by the bullet. And is the bullet aimed at them or the motorcycle. Stay tuned for the next thrilling comic.

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MistakeNPotatoes
14th Aug 2015, 8:30 PM

Oh wow, you're right! I wasn't even modeling this after anything, I just kinda drew "rifle.jpg", haha.

That's really cool, I like to know things like this, I like it when you guys bring it to my attention :)

I hope you liked today's update, though, I'm glad I had you on edge, too!

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Jackarais
29th Jan 2018, 8:10 PM

THE COLORS ON THIS PAGE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

SO GOOD DUDE!!!!!!!!! damn

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