Pt. 1 Ch. 6 - Page 2

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MistakeNPotatoes
27th May 2016, 10:30 AM

Woah, you okay, bud?

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Babble_ON
27th May 2016, 10:39 AM

I had a dream like that last night.

It was surprisingly pleasant.

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MistakeNPotatoes
27th May 2016, 10:48 AM

Yeah? :D

I don't know if it's Harrison's expression there or what but uh, it seems like you're being disingenuous...

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xianyu118
27th May 2016, 10:39 AM

wh
wow that was
wow, now I have nightmares

this is good

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MistakeNPotatoes
27th May 2016, 11:11 AM

I was trying to do something a little different to represent the "otherworldliness" and "dreaminess" of what was going on in his brain. Glad it worked! :D

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gideonland
27th May 2016, 10:46 AM

No time to rest, apparently. Work to do.

Love the gritty texture you have in the air at his place. Really fitting for the character.

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MistakeNPotatoes
27th May 2016, 11:13 AM

I thought the texture worked out pretty well for him, I just need to figure out how to.. get it to work in other places, too..

And yeah, Jack has trouble resting, normally, but this is a new thing for him.

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sigpig
27th May 2016, 11:04 AM

Too bad that admitting to someone else that he has these nightmares would be seen (at least, to Jack) as a weakness...

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MistakeNPotatoes
27th May 2016, 11:15 AM

Oh yeah, he would NEVER tell anyone, haha :')

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ProfEtheric
27th May 2016, 12:10 PM

It was said before in comic, but I think it applies here. Poor Jack.

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MistakeNPotatoes
27th May 2016, 2:49 PM

Ah yes :D You remember, heheh.

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Taily
27th May 2016, 3:47 PM

image

SPOOKY SCARY SKELETONS

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MistakeNPotatoes
27th May 2016, 5:02 PM

Damn it, Taily XD

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MadJak91
27th May 2016, 5:06 PM

Any comment on the first panel? :O
Look cool!

Is that PTSD after almost dying before? It would make sense.
Unless it is some eldritch vision of sorts. Like his species dying or him :/
I am going with the recent fiasco (recent as in comic time, gosh time flies).

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MistakeNPotatoes
27th May 2016, 5:32 PM

Thank you so much!

But hmmm... it might be something like that :) It's certainly not normal to have dreams like that, but the cause, hmmm...

NO JOKE THOUGH ABOUT THE TIME. Facebook reminded me today that a year ago exactly is when Jaunt tried to kill Clara. Woah.

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Bob Mozark
28th May 2016, 8:05 AM

The nightmare of a nightmare is a nightmare indeed. You really outdid yourself with the artwork in panel one.

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MistakeNPotatoes
28th May 2016, 9:27 AM

Thank you! I really wanted it to stand out compared to my regular style :)

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As I completely focus on the wrong thing...

Ahakarin
28th May 2016, 11:04 PM

I like the lack of nonsensical dream activated head springs that launch characters into a straight up sitting position the instant the nightmare gets to the scary part.

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MistakeNPotatoes
29th May 2016, 3:43 PM

Oh, haha! Thanks, I knew this was a little cliche already but I didn't want it to be ridiculous :)

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