pt. 1 ch. 10 - Page 1


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17th Nov 2017, 11:30 AM

We'll open up this chapter to find where Irwin has been... let's do some catching up! :)

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17th Nov 2017, 11:47 AM

You've got a knack for 'otherworldy' landscapes. Whenever I try and create something weird it just comes out kinda spiky.

Nice work!

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17th Nov 2017, 1:41 PM

I second that promotion! You're a lieutenant-artist now. :D

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18th Nov 2017, 4:09 PM

Aw jeez, thanks you guys. I actually wish I rendered this better but that's always going to be the case I think, heh.

Either way I really appreciate it :)

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Fabian W.
17th Nov 2017, 11:49 AM

Irwin lives in a space whale carcass now!

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18th Nov 2017, 4:09 PM

It's a living? :')

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17th Nov 2017, 12:17 PM

As always your alien worlds are beautiful, and your renditions of alien creatures are imaginative. But I think the real strength of this page is contained in the last two panels.

There's such a huge amount of "show don't tell" going on there, that so easily answers a lot of lingering questions about Irwin, Thigg, and their "relationship". Questions I've wondered about since the last big battle scene anyway. The only relevant questions this page doesn't answer for me are "Exactly how long has it been since their escape?" (It can't have been too long since other events in the story seem a little time sensitive) and "Just how bad does that space whale smell?" Irwins' nose isn't crinkled in disgust, but he could be de-sensitized to it, or Thigg could be suppressing his olfactory senses.

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Mr. Casual
17th Nov 2017, 12:33 PM

. . . just tell me Irwin didn't eat his way in there. X( Guck.

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17th Nov 2017, 1:40 PM

Actually, I think that's exactly what he did...

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17th Nov 2017, 2:17 PM

Alien landscapes!

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17th Nov 2017, 4:08 PM

OMG! Floating alien whale creatures! Yes :>
What are they?? :O
Really looks like a videogame stage, haha :D

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17th Nov 2017, 4:14 PM

I can't believe I ate the whole thing.

Dude, your alien landscapes rock! So many Irwin-Thigg questions answered, so many new questions rising. Glad to hear you are feeling rested.

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17th Nov 2017, 4:52 PM

The shadowing and the eyes in the last panel kill me, particularly the shadowing *on the bottom half of the eyes themselves*. That is a look of true, bleak depression. He was almost manic with glee when he had his first shot at Jaunt. It didn't work out.

And this hellscape might be the only thing he sees for the rest of his existence as his humanity ebbs away. It's all encapsulated in one LOOK.


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18th Nov 2017, 9:54 AM

This page is gorgeous!

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18th Nov 2017, 2:12 PM

"I'm renting it unfurnished, but at least the view is good."

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18th Nov 2017, 6:23 PM

Wow, I remember you showing me a preview of this a long time ago! It's even cooler in context! IRWIN IS TOTALLY PULLING A PINOCCHIO WITH THIS WHALE CARCASS

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